
um is it just me or does chapt 48 read really weirdly? the dialogue is stilted and just feels slightly *off*. like why is yeon calling his literal boyfriend “buddy”. he’s never called him that before. why does yeon say he didn’t like the perfume and they never address it.
why does everything feel slightly mistranslated? am I going crazy?? i don’t mean disrespect but i am Confused
HOLY SHIT THIS IS SO FUCKING GOOD. THE ART? THE DEVELOPMENT? THE MOTHERFUCKING *COMMUNICATION*??
(wipes a tear from eye) i never thought id see the day where a smutty short story bl had communication and no rape/dubious consent......you dont see that everyday....