
I love this. But if I'm gonna be really objective about it, the inconsistencies with the characters' personalities distract me a lot. I guess I need more justification to how the Knight got over the intense past he's had. Granted, we haven't really reached that part yet, but I guess it just bothers me how easily he got his lust back, and his ability to be cute as hell.

Gays, as much as possible, don't let yourself get attracted to, let alone fall in love with straight men. We all know how hard that is.
Maybe stories like this are possible irl, but man, what are the odds of that?
So idk, I'm not trying to be a debbie downer here but yall get my point.
(Sincerely, someone who's inlove with a fucking straightie.)
PS: Let love happen. Don't rush it.

The ending ruined it. It's not even decent. The fact that the build up was too fucking extreme only for it to end so abruptly, it made the whole thing turn to shit.
Idk, I really loved this. Like so much, I went as far as defending it from people criticizing it for its draggy build, all this time I thought the wait will be worth it...
and here it is. Fuck me.
Cannot thank these people enough. While I'm for sure hoping updates as quick as this will be consistent, I wouldn't really mind either way. Just thank you thank you thank you! (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ