
Can't blame gallion at all they were incompatible as hell. A child being a competition of love is peak OI toxic ml characteristic and it's interesting how this story makes it as an inhuman aspect relating to this story's male lead. Usually I find that toxicity icky but this story actually uses it as a lore accurate feature so this gets a pass lol.

The two mcs process of falling in love felt rushed? But the whole theme about wanting to become someone's reason to live was kinda beautiful ngl I teared up a bit. The revenge thing was totally not the main them of this story as much as it tried to be or maybe this was intentional? My literacy is failing me with this one. All in all 8.5/10 the art was good
Ik it's been a while but I'm still stuck on the fact he brushed off the miscarriage to never mention it again. That's just so fkn cruel to Erna I don't think I can forgive him for that amongst the other cruel shit he did.
That's why erna solidified her resolve to leave his a*s