
Finally finished this and I have thoughts… firstly throughout the entire story I felt like I was kinda floating. I had absolutely no idea what ray’s objective was, to me it was like he got snatched up, tried to kill jiskar, got aggressively diddled and tortured (I’ll come back to this part), then ran away with a veryyyy sexy hot Sephiroth lookalike (lots of emphasis on sexy he could step on my and I’d say thank you), to this hidden crazy elf world and got called a dwarf, went back to his man, dominated him and switched up the whole dynamic lmao and then continued to rage war against rebels in the country (honorable mention the dragons). Now it may seem like I’m just summarizing the story but it felt like a really bad trip like if you ate some expired shrooms or something. Back to the diddling part I think that breezed by really fast and honestly don’t even think that like it was even needed bc everyone js acted like nothing happened after jiskar killed that fucker, especially Ray?? Like this is your butt we’re talking about here, personally we should’ve had a torture the molester chapter but whatever, anyways in conclusion I wouldn’t say that it was rushed but like we were 20 miles over the speed limit once we got past the middle of story. I think I’m done tho toodles!( ̄へ ̄)

this... this what exactly what im thinking. the pacing goes from 40km to 100km so fast lmaoo. ( not to say that the art changed.)
wheres the empress fam execution? did they just offed in the background? we just know that the little crown prince gets exiled, and its from the extra chapter what the heck. also i really really want to see mc meet his half brother, its feel like such a waste not to explore that.
this manhwa have so much potential tbh. they have a good start, but then it get rushed and lost their direction. MC have a good character, while ML... hmm how should i say, a bit bland like cut-cardboard of ML's characters because they didn't get to tell his POV clearly. so much potential wasted man... ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

Yes inclusivity! Literally so surprised that they’re so damn freaky from like one day one, that gagged me so bad but I’m not complaining lmao. Parts of the story felt very “wow ooga booga African tribe warrior, he’s so exotic” like i know he’s actually from an African tribe but dude’s mom is literally a international model, the dirt houses were definitely a stretch and everyone acting like he’s some unique anomaly just because he’s foreign actually fried me but it also gave me second hand embarrassment as well lmao (≧∀≦). In conclusion, I really liked this, very cute, 1 in like a million chance of seeing a “black” person in yaoi? Unsure to call him that since he has like literally straight hair or it could be locs I can’t tell by the artstyle but it’s unlikely, still not complaining btw. And honorable mention to the uke, omg he’s so cute, I just wanna eat him ok bai (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
Yall smell that smell? It’s a certain kinda smelly smell that’s the smelliest I’ve ever smelt. It smells like fish bc something realll fishy is going here. I suspect what’s his name is erasing his memories from his past life bc something bad happened and that snake had something to do with it…anyways definitely rooting for pinkie pie but I also thought maybe he’s like been isekaied from another world he’s very sussy, can’t wait for more chapters! ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ cause same I was saying that as well