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Finally this ship sailing hopefully it satiates the thirst for BL of the other i wont mention fan service.

This is the type of that implodes painfully and slowly because the weak MC will just wither away slowly and ends up an empty shell whilst the ML desperately tries to hang on to an empty shell and bring it back to life. Pathetic but thats what happens when you’re weak of heart and mind.

7 chapters of me waiting for something interesting to actually happen

Another useless guide verse plot with rape and abuse from beginning till end. Whats the point of it being a reborn plot line if nothing changes and the bottom finds himself in the exact same situation. Fuck these idiotic authors

That dude is lying to himself about no regrets i betcha in those dreams his free from being sura and the MC loves him freely. Zero chance he doesn’t wish it was that way irl. He knows he fucked up so he comforts himself with saying its fate blah blah. You wouldn’t be writing delusional letters about picnics and make belief bliss if you were truly happy with the way it ended up.

Author couldn’t quite get to the finish line to execute the plot so gave up… the last chapters and art seem half assed.

The ex is a grown ass man acting so pathetic, put you big boy panties on you chose your career over love. Does he really think he can force a grown man to love him again seriously

These authors tag these plots as psychological but you never actually see anything psychological going on or any real attempt at explaining the characters motivations and mental health or personality disorders that makes them behave in the way that they do. What are the odds that two rapists would rape each other at some point in their lives.

They just go rape, revenge and more rape. It’s like okay but what is the reason? Are they a sociopath, psychopath, sexual sadist, it’s always some loose shallow reason thats just meant to suffice enough rather than a well thought out character development. Then to add insult to injury they romanticise the whole thing.

Okay if you just like to draw men get raped and other forms of abuse do that but framing it as psychological when you can’t be bothered to actually put in real psychological elements into the plot is pathetic. I would respect an author who just said i like to draw men getting violated.

If these authors insist on using rape as the main plot device then at least give it the respect it deserves instead of some BS!! This is why I hold killing stalking to a high standard in terms of how they dealt with an actual psychological BL that involves rape or coercion or even the beast must die and back to school. The authors actually have depth.

Damn i swear literally more than half the new Bls coming out in past few months are just short stories. With that being said art was nice but plot was a dud. Honestly Angst does not = good plot i wish BL authors understood this.

I really would love to know the thought process behind the authors thinking when they came up with this story because it’s truly mind boggling.