The jump scare at him turning into a bunny mid sex didn’t need to see that.
Damn the author is giving interesting commentary on society and work places practices through the Mc and his dialogue with others. Quite interesting i like that.
The ML is unattractive but attractive at the same time. Im confusion he has got charisma though.
he's hella charismatic
When you realise what the big guy role is later, you will find him millions time more attractive!
Getting his ass whopped by that old man is a bridge to far only so much suspension of belief come on author be serious
The author has a hand fetish, it was cute but the lack of lube in every sex scene was disturbing and looked uncomfortable.
The bottom is toxic positivity arghhh so weak and irritating.
Aileen seems to be digressing as a character she is a dragon is she not? I know our boy is supposed to be the saviour no problem but… whats up with Aileen turning dumb and not knowing anything?
Her character is really designed like that tho? She's a dragon child that is left alone in the tower to manage and her only job is to release a projection of a black dragon every blue moon. That is why the tower is in chaos and the pig and other creatures terrorize the tower, she can't and doesn't have the capacity yet to intervene.
Are original plots just not a thing? There are 100s of BLs like this. Exact same formula with exact same art. Free us from the painter of the night low budget replicas. Another new BL to ignore. I wish we would get more creativity and different authors from different cultures to infuse some much needed newness to BL it's reading the same shit over and over.
the solution is very very easy honey. Pay for legal apps/site, there, you'll find different art styles, different story, and plots especially if it's japanese. Currently, I'm interested with thai comics cause it's new to me. Btw if you can't do that then endure this "reading the same shit over and over again" so funny
I pay for whats good and a refreshing plot if it’s the same ole plot formulas I'm not wasting money on that. Im currently reading 3 different historical BLs on official sites. Paying for this would just be a waste as it’s basically a walmart version of painter of the night but i will check out Thai BLs.
well u're half right but it's worth it. If ur language is limited to 2 then yeah stick to illegal sites cuz some good stories I've found is incomplete in english or none at all so I end up staring at some chapters hoping to see it someday in language that I know
Idk what you’re reading, but if u want original historical plot here are the one I read that are refreshing.
The tyran’s annals (crazy about you)
Bongchon’s Bride (THE BEST ONE SO FAR)
Plum Blossom Shade
Excuse me ma’am this is a Wendy’s drive thru
Can you name the legal site for me
YES bongchon’s bride is my favourite story in this site!!!!!
thai bls aren't that different, you will soon find out that thai bl readers have a very specific taste. anyways what are the 3 works you mentioned?
i swear i keep trying to post/reply the names of the legal ones but it doesn't show up?? maybe it's blocked by admin so sorry
yeah links and names of other websites gets deleted try to censor them
Chill.......It's fine
I don’t quite understand why people are saying a redemption arc of him begging or grovelling will suffice? The author couldn’t dream up a plausible reason for them to enter a normal relationship with love if they tried. The ML is a psychopath with no empathy and the MC has zero self worth. Neither of them are capable of being in love with anyone else let alone each other. You can’t love anyone if you don’t love yourself and you can’t love others if you lack the ability to empathise with them. I don’t understand how author forgot these basic things when writing the characters. Dan is fine and as a character he can grow and find self worth and courage. But the ML is simply an irredeemable maniac.
The psychological damage alone wouldn’t even allow for a relationship on any level whatsoever.
And obviously the author was so high of drawing the abusive porn they forgot that they wrote the ML into a corner and now lazily just copying and pasting the same dynamics from BJ Alex when characters had to change to progress the relationship.
The toxicity is not whats shocking or even a problem it’s just the sheer arrogance of writing such a crap plot, with crap characters. I dunno man i feel like author-nim needs to be humbled it shouldn’t be acceptable to shill out gold plated crap.
damn gurl, you worded out that better than i could ever have.
You ateeee
That's what I've been saying lol
The author cannot build up a romantic relationship at all between them and it really shows through and through. Like 85% of scenes between them were smut, 10% was JK being an asshole and 5% was of JK doing the bare minimum and somehow we are meant to believe that Dan fell in love with the guy in a plausible way when all we remember is the smut where the only saving grace is the art cuz their sexual chemistry ain't even good.
For this relationship to seem plausible either of those characters have to be re-written completely: Either JK gets toned tf down and maybe still is a bad but not all around abusive and is atill able to grow as a person, just give him more complexity OR imo the funnier route make Dan a little asshole bastard with a bunch of backbone but only towards JK, like Dan is an angel to everyone else otherwise. You have no idea how fun this story could be if it was mutually toxic yaoi instead.
Or if it was a psychological thriller story where Dan gets out of this abusive relationship and then learns the way assassinating your ex which is how he meets a better not abusive boyfriend and then they bang consentually after having murdered and disposed of horse face. Honestly I should re-write Jinx out of spite like that some time lmfao
Your ideas are 1000 times better than the current plot lol