I read the novel honestly there isn’t anything in there that’s original, i will give the author credit for saying the seme is a psychopath and has no empathy whatsoever but honestly they could’ve delved into his condition even more and made it more part of the story rather than just saying he has a condition that’s why he acts this way. It would gave his character that extra touch and made readers understand him much better.
The bottom has no personality, no character, little to no self worth or esteem he is pretty much a door mat from start till finish. So do not expect any character development with him. He remains passive.
The novel annoyed me because it relied very heavily on the seme being an asshole and the bottom being a clueless dimwit with no real nuances in the plot.
To me i found the novel to be very unoriginal and boring. That relied heavily on abuse etc… strip that away and there isn’t really a good plot or characters.
Kang said some straight bs to his own boyfriend needing more experience dating other people blah blah blah and basically said he didn’t think the relationship would last because of age gap and experience something he should have mentioned a long time ago if that was his thought process. The whole point of someone younger being introduced is for kang to learn his lesson and for Yiyoung to experience being chased by someone closer to his age it can be a testing time in age gap relationships because these types of insecurities do pop up and need to be addressed. This is a 3rd wheel that I don’t mind because it makes perfect sense for the dynamics in the plot rather than a pointless love rival.
Nothing happens in this BL that is nearly bad as what some readers make out it to be i think some are over dramatic about the so called “cheating” which isn’t really cheating. I can’t take y’all seriously with jinx as one of the most of the most popular BL out right now . And when did the author ever say Woojin would get his own side story? We don’t even see his love interest in the main story just a glimpse in the side stories. Just made up imaginary assumptions about side stories now y'all mad that the Main couple of the story has side stories? How does that work? Complaining that the story won’t end but continue to read it anyway. Then complain about the hiatus despite the author health issues which they have spoken about before so which is it? If i was the author i wouldn’t give y'all shit…. Ungrateful mofos
This shit is being read for free taking money out of the authors pockets but steady acting entitled complaining about the story as if y'all could do better. The author wrote their story how they wanted if you don’t like it get lost or at least pay for the chapters then complain.
This story has 4 protagonists they are literally on the cover… author might just just have a writing slump in regards to the other couple which happens sometimes no need to complain because we don’t know the creative process. We haven’t even gotten into the other arcs with the missing gangster father and where he went, the time skip when He tian lives for a while. No point complaining the other two will be back on focus soon enough…. This didn’t even start off with a cohesive plot it just happened to start having mini arcs etc…
For research purposes were can i get something like that??
Could’ve been a switch couple no matter which way you look at it the black haired guy didn’t real suit being a bottom which threw the whole story off.
Another useless male lead who can’t even give someone basic respect, he is the father of your child ffs!! The male lead is just a weak bitch nothing alpha about him at all.
They went through all that just to not even have a basic family unit that calls each other mom, dad and son? I honestly didn’t think this could get anymore stupid but evidently i was wrong.
OG BL reader here, new kids on the block if you want to read a real long and well thought out BL with rape, violence, Stockholm syndrome, stalking, straight guy fucking a gay guy, in depth and well researched explanation of both Leads backgrounds that explains everything about their present actions, serial killer, fleshed out side characters and fitting ending etc…. KILLING STALKING is all you need. The author puts a lot of effort in showing the world of messed up people with a real intent to not convey rape as romantic or even a relationship like that as romantic.
That will show you BL like this are just cheap cash grabs with no thought or care.
The second sex organ hole placement is bizarre it’s right on his stomach I’ve seen bls with snake guys they just have two dicks the second couple is cute but the sex scenes the hole thing is just too weird
Is there a single person who is happy in this story
No originality just copy and paste of a 100 other BLs are the authors forced to write these stories or what? I thought artists/authors are meant to be creatives. I have an imagination better than this.
They are minors in high school why is anyone expecting them to have sex?
The Director was already writing the relationship off as if it doesn’t have a future. Not sure why anyone mad that someone younger with more in common with our cute bottom has come along to light a fire in that ass. Director should’ve never said that in the first place now chickens come home to roost. I ain’t mad.
Asami looks half the size he did and he now looks no more than a couple years older than Akihito. His commanding presence has also vanished without a trace. Can he go back to being a gangster and Akihito a photographer please.!
I don’t know Wether to call it brave or balls of steel to be using Angels and The first humans created and referencing them in this way. Also saying Humans can create other Humans using Angels DNA. It’s very much blasphemous but I’m curious to see how the story turns out. Id be curious to know why they used the biblical references for the guide verse. Very interesting indeed hopefully we get a creators note on it.
He let him raw dog his ass without a condom a few hours after meeting him just because his handsome.
Now that i remember wasn’t Sehyuk abused when he was younger by that orphanage guy? There may or may not have been SA as well. I don’t think he is the type to rape someone. Maybe author forgot their own character background. He isn’t a psychopath either as it’s clear his whole goal for getting this job was to be with Hamin so you can’t even say his inherently violent. Violence is a means rather than enjoyment. He is Just very obsessive, lack boundaries and his rough around the edges. I think the rape scene can be blamed on the author rather than the character itself. Because look at him in subsequent side stories his asking advice, going on dates he finds unpleasant and actually listening to Hamin during their conversation at the bar rather than being overbearing. Author definitely dropped the ball on that because I never got the impression even from previous works that rape is even something they would write.
Ugly art… and the sex was horrible considering it had no plot.