
I feel like this kid is so op for the sake of being op and doesn't really have any underlying story or logic to back it up. His powers aren't properly explained so it becomes a jumbled mess. Like the sword thing, is that some kind of ability to know the weight and type of sword it is? Or is he just a sword maniac? How come that isn't shown in other aspects? Is he a normal human, or some kind of God to tamper with some important looking "treaty"? What relationship does he have with ink? What can that bird really do? And his friend, while their relationship is cool af, what is the nature of his friend? Human? God? Some kind of top of the line hacker or genius inventor? Is his ability magic or some kind of futuristic code-y stuff? LIKE I AM CONFUSION.

This isn't bad art, in fact, it's really good art, but i got pretty confused with the storyline and feelings the characters express sometimes, as if there's no real direction this story is actually going in. In other words, its confusing and i can't figure out what's going on. I kinda stopped half way, because there was no developement (love wise). It was as if the author went "I want her with him!" and then suddenly changed, "No.....maybe she would be better with him.." and the direction of the story changed. At first it was a dark story, but then it became tjen it lost all the emotions, and in my iopinion, was what the story revolved around. A(╯°Д °)╯╧╧(╯°Д °)╯╧╧s if the emotions that should be felt at a certain time, were just deleted from the story. Though I really like the art.

In my opinion, the art style is shit...

WHAT HAPPENED. LIKE SO WAS THE THREAD REAL? SPIRITUAL? HOW DID THE OTHER GIRL SEE IT AFTER IT BROKE? LIKE WHAT????? WAS THAT AN ACTUAL THREAD? OR WHAT? I AM super confused @_@

u confuse me more.

You know, I think it didn't really break... I think her vision "Broke" and she can't see the thread nymore, because she doesn't need to anymore... ;-)

IN ALL SERIOUSNESS, if I had a boyfriend like this, he would probably make me really nervous, insecure and worried. If he ignored my warnings about potential boyfriend snatchers and waved it off smiling, then I might just like not trust him to take care of himself. He's the type that requires all of maintanence and all. And I might be crying or something very few minutes. But my point is that if I had this kind of boyfriend, that didn't really respect my opinions. Then it would make me super insecure at the hardest points in our relationship. Which eventually leads to our break up. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
Anyone else have some opinions, or is it just me? (● ̄(エ) ̄●)
They should just get married already.
whoooo? if ur talking about arhad and ianna then YEEEEEESSS
OMG I SHIP THEM TOO!!! Anyway I can't wait to see till ianna shreads him(≧∀≦)
Yes those 2 xD I legit leave this for like a day and come back and see the 16 up votes lmao IANNA X ARHAD ALL THE WAYYYYYYYYYYY. She pretty much promised him her future lol, so here I am, waiting for them to get married
I'm so excited for their interactions. They didn't have much yet the chemistry is FIRE damn! I can't wait for them to actually face each other