Dimension Breaker May 21, 2021 6:44 am

You see the problem with these type of stories where the protagonist goes back to the past and in the end, still ends up with her past abuser with the excuse of "he's changed, he's not the same person as he was in the past" is that it romanticizes past trauma, toxic relationships, and abusive behavior which is not and will never be a good reading material. Your pain or even a drug, although explains it, is never an excuse to abuse another. Moreover, the characters don't feel real at all, they just serve as a plot device so the audience's sympathy would fall on the female protagonist. Having side characters as a plot device isn't a bad thing yes but your main cast shouldn't just serve as some plot device, sadly in this case, they do.

While we don't blame the characters for turning into what they are, it is ultimately the author's fault. Stories involving emotional abuse and healing over it takes a lot of emotional maturity. If the author intended for Ruve and Tia to end up together, she shouldn't have made him Tia's abuser. As a writer, you have the responsibility to take proper care of the themes you want to portray in order to not send the wrong message to your audience. Stories shape worldviews, folks.


So I caution you, only read this if you want an example of what bad writing is, how you shouldn't romanticize certain things, how the characters only serve as a plot device for the protagonist, and how the author failed to deliver her story's chosen themes properly.

    Holy music stops. May 21, 2021 7:13 am

    Ikr!! The fact that they romanticize past trauma and abuser is and will never be a good reading material I rated this so low and I don't even regret it(⌐■-■)

    snowbelvz May 23, 2021 1:16 am

    i havent seen stories like that, and i have seen somewhat controversial stories but damn this story is disgusting as too much manipulation even in the second life. Like i hope kids dont think they should give rapists and murders second chances because they say they will or have changed. I even saw someones opinion that we should forgive what he did.

Dimension Breaker May 21, 2021 6:39 am

I think I also need a kiss too ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄

Dimension Breaker May 19, 2021 12:28 pm

A MUST READ if you just LOVE a revoltingly trashy ML who emotionally and sexually abused, killed FL AND her father AND their child in the first life, but fret not cause the author provided a pathetic excuse of a redemption arc in an attempt to justify his actions. (it really didn't, but oh well you tried anyway).

Along with this author comes up with a mentally deranged FL who chose to love and end up with her past abuser and killer anyway cause at the end of the day love prevails right? *snorts sarcastically *. She literally convinced herself that the pathetic excuse of a sob story in the past is justified and enough to overlook his past actions when it really doesn't. It really doesn't. PTSD who? She doesn't exist. Justice or revenge? Never heard of it. Hotel? Trivago.

    Holy music stops. May 21, 2021 7:25 am

    Yes A MUST READ EVRYONE. If you want to feel rage this is the best story for you!!!! No need to worry about the Male lead being better he's shittier than my shit!

    Side effects my include
    *Rage
    *Anger
    *Anger management issues
    *The urge to throw away your phone

Dimension Breaker May 18, 2021 4:57 am

I love how this is the most expressive she has ever been. The author is telling us who really is the love interest

Dimension Breaker May 17, 2021 1:50 pm

Can someone tell me all the smutty chaps? Hehe

    LIIRAX May 17, 2021 1:52 pm

    there are so many lol but i also dont know sorry

    ミク May 17, 2021 2:20 pm

    yea theres a lot but one of my favorites is chapter 51 and 54

    Dimension Breaker May 17, 2021 7:34 pm
    yea theres a lot but one of my favorites is chapter 51 and 54 ミク

    Thanks (▰˘◡˘▰)

Dimension Breaker May 14, 2021 12:22 am

You see the problem with these type of stories where the protagonist goes back to the past and in the end, still ends up with her past abuser with the excuse of "he's changed, he's not the same person as he was in the past" is that it romanticizes past trauma, toxic relationships, and abusive behavior which is not and will never be a good reading material. Your pain or even a drug, although explains it, is never an excuse to abuse another. Moreover, the characters don't feel real at all, they just serve as a plot device so the audience's sympathy would fall on the female protagonist. Having side characters as a plot device isn't a bad thing yes but your main cast shouldn't just serve as some plot device, sadly in this case, they do.

While we don't blame the characters for turning into what they are, it is ultimately the author's fault. Stories involving emotional abuse and healing over it takes a lot of emotional maturity. If the author intended for Ruve and Tia to end up together, she shouldn't have made him Tia's abuser. As a writer, you have the responsibility to take proper care of the themes you want to portray in order to not send the wrong message to your audience. Stories shape worldviews, folks.


So I caution you, only read this if you want an example of what bad writing is, how you shouldn't romanticize certain things, how the characters only serve as a plot device for the protagonist, and how the author failed to deliver her story's chosen themes properly.

    Tik tok May 14, 2021 6:41 am

    Great analysis of the story I wholeheartedly agree!

    moody_bish May 15, 2021 2:21 pm

    im at the chapter where the spoiler is told and i came back to the topics just in case. im glad to have found your review. for me, toxic themes are just fine if it is executed well (meaning the twisted personalities complement each other instead of creating a romanticized abuser x victim because there's nothing to take from the story if it's like that).

    and the spoiled ending disrespects the whole premise of the story which is why im disappointed with the author's decision for that ending. i believe in the saying that the author is dead because the text must live on it's own, if Tia wanted to be free from her abuser then the author's intent to force them together causes the fiction to collapse because it becomes unnatural to the rules of its own world.

    jo5y May 16, 2021 8:27 am

    RIGGGHHHHT like fuck so what if he changed he is still the abuser. plus if she didn't change he wouldn't change either and would abuse her AGAIN. FUCK

Dimension Breaker May 11, 2021 1:26 pm

Nalipay kos imong mga notes dzai (≧∀≦)

    Fuho May 14, 2021 12:07 am

    Aww salamat dzai(っ´▽`)っ

Dimension Breaker May 11, 2021 2:15 am

To y'all who said Tia deserves better? I thought so too when I started reading and it took me about halfway to realize she doesn't. She really doesn't. Why? Cause she CHOSE HIM. She doesn't deserve either of the 2nd ML(s), THEY are the ones who deserves better. Tia made her choice when she could have run tf away from the bastard who tormented and killed her but she chose to stay because of the shit excuse of a redemption arc. She's mentally deranged to get back together to her abuser and killer. She's a lost cause, he's a lost cause. They deserve each other. I just wish I could ask the author like are you okay? What were your thoughts when you created this story? Like seriously.

Dimension Breaker May 10, 2021 7:23 am

Someone needs to re upload the last 2 chapters with the proper credits pages. If you're going to re upload, pls include the translator team's credit pages.

Dimension Breaker May 8, 2021 4:09 am

Cute but deadly

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