
the story isn’t bad it’s just idk awkward?? like the pacing is off and it feels weird since she’s probably around 14 since she just got to hs and she’s living in the same house as her bf w no parents. all the ig sexual scenes just feel weird idk how to explain it like it just feels a bit pushy,, i wish they started dating when she was older or like at least started doing stuff later it just feels weird

like if you’re just gonna be anxious don’t create a plan like this jeez

haha in her defense the brown haired dude was supposed to fulfill the plan not the duke. The duke just got stubborn about it. Which at this point of the story is just dumb. The writer is just making drama up. Like I dare to say that they are both behaving out of character now. He would not want to pretend to be someone elses lover, and she wouldn't let him based on the last few chapters before this one.
Her original plan was a great one since it would push the other two characters closer. But the writer seems intent on adding more useless drama.
i always hated the “my wife died giving birth to this child i hate this child now” trope like ??? that’s your kid?? shouldn’t you love that child since you both created her? i don’t hate the brothers since they were children and they didn’t know any better since they’re supposed to follow their father but it’s so stupid for the father to be mad