Never been a fan of doujinshis where the characters go "out of character" Idk, it didnt feel like luffy would react that way or ace would be that way either if this actually happened It was still a cute story tho ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
I prefer shipping yuki with tetsu than hyodo. Hyodo is daddy material alright but idk... I can smell the ending from here where hyodo dies and tetsu is all thats left. Yuki never had a father figure so maybe thats why he is confusing his feelings
Would have preferred if this was not a yaoi, the story is interesting and somehow it could maybe work without the yaoi?
Interesting read ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭