PHANTOMXD5's Topics (73)

Bro the goblin

Mc just slapped her with reality

I know that he's a piece of shit but he could've get a better life instead of screaming and saying your better than your brother (mc) just work hard and prove yourself that you're a great blacksmith too, he's so drunk on his ego he forgot that he need to learn and work hard to get the skills and experience he needed, he could've made a name for himself by doing that so he can take the normal request than while his brother(mc) take the special ones. He also have a very crude way of solving things instead of training himself like their father he faked his creations leading to his downfall and he also have a very fragile ego that when he's being compared he lashes out bitch can't take criticism. Though he is crucial to the story because none of this will happen without his fragile ego this guy deserves a trophy made of dirt for his actions
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This is a para social's dream

Yea so Mia(the girl with huge assets but is a year more or less age as the mc) reminds me of a friend. When we were 15 she was the most developed out of all of us but after that her growth stopped there. I guess Mia is one of those people that grow too fast but stopped after.

I thought this was a pervert s dream manga again but the story now have a reason why be is like that ╥﹏╥
Mc just wants to raise his kids(though he just a wasted dude and didn't give a good impression at the start it's sad that his kids have to die)

This is just straight up hentai ┑(￣Д ￣)┍

Oh boy another manga about boobs. The Japanese surely like boobs. Also mc is on the always on the verge of losing to his desires.
Oh and it's also surprisingly tame because there's no exposure YET. ╮(￣▽￣)╭

I like it that even when it has the same genre and cliche as a lot of mangas it has a different story and a twist that a lot of mangas don't really use though I thought that he will be heavily injured while attempting to rescue her and a good reason why he have a skill that is powerful probably he inherit it from his father and he can't use it because he thinks it's useless. I also think that the antagonist was smart because killing MC's father then making her child bully him to make him feel useless and keep him at bay (=・ω・=)

This kinda is cool but I have a long distrust with this type of manhwas cause there's gonna be a chap or a MC personality change that Mc is arrogant, rich, have a lot of influence then some background son/daughter of a rich family gonna challenge mc to a rich power showdown then background character loses then begs mc for forgiveness then be a snake trying to be MC's friend. It's just bullshit I mean yea mc is strong but still not strong enough to just flaunt his/her money to everyone trying to prove he/she is the most rich and powerful in the room I swear I saw this in tv series as well it's a staple on a lot. That's why I'm sick of it


.. but I'm not gonna hate it might be different though the art is a bit too light and the names FOR ME is confusing because it's hard for me to remember names



And after reading I already know that it's gonna be bad for me because I don't like goofy after cool and the design of the parasite is a bit silly and not awesome I prefer that with the current color scheme they just add a bit of muscle and make him a bit bulky like venom the character is supposed to be powerful not lanky even though beru from solo leveling is thin he is not lanky
And the stance and silly goofy is not cutting it for me it lacks the cool anime fights vibe.
Also the eyes don't make them like human eyes for a monster it's weird, make the eyes have dark sclera or just make them a single color like red or black with a white dot because it's a monster it's supposed to be terrifying and not like a normal Joe's eye Kaiju no.8 did it and it looks so cool
AND the side character don't make them unnecessary I know that mc got a superpower but also the side character so just don't go introducing a character that is cool and all then just make him/her chicken out.
Then the pacing if the story it's all going so fast but to little pages in the chapters the readers are not gonna understand the story if it's all so fast and not giving a lot of clues yea the mc escaped then they're looking for him then what? Have another unnecessary power showdown yea power showdown is cool but sometimes its not good if you're doing it too often(╯°Д °)╯╧╧




Man I just ranted sorry if some people are offended and I really don't mean to offend this is just my own opinions to share

Also thank you if you read this whole (=・ω・=)