
I don't know why....but I kinda like the uke to die...I don't mean it in a bad way
Like:
When the seme goes to Kenya for work....the uke then felt the fatigue then dies cause of over working himself.....then when the seme returns he visited the love hotel and asked the kid brother only then he realizes that the uke died a year ago.....something like dat hahahaha ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
I kinda really enjoyed this....I was just reading it out of boredom...but dang it is really interesting...take out the sex scenes and it might turn really good for an anime series
Better dialogue and no-hentai and this would be MUCH better.
Yep yep!