
There is almost sex in every 2 chapters and i know its yaoi for a reason but slow down brochacho there is no reason for you to be gobbling those wieners back and forth. Also mc brain is size of a peanut, basic communication? GONE. any will to cooperate? DEMOLISHED. mc brain? NON EXISTENT. Ts is just hard to read after, idk 20 chapters?? The sheer lack of any communication is fucking eating me inside. But the story must go on ig? Im dropin ts gl gng on readin this horse twat
Honestly, for me, this story is too fast-paced, and there are no slower sections where their past could be slowly revealed. It's as if the author wanted to fit everything into as few chapters as possible. but yk what? Idc they love each other and thats the most important thing ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭