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The story of a reclusive Archmage heroine and a slightly obsessive male lead who ends up chasing aft...

Marquis' daughter, Charlotte, was blessed with a Gift known as Monster Eater, which allows her ...

Ten years ago, dungeons suddenly appeared all over the world. Yuma Minashiro fell into a dungeon on ...

?“If I’m going to be abandoned anyway, I’ll allow myself to act freely one last time” – A ...

"The world will become your enemy if you descend into Jianghu…" The young patriarch...

Eight children, each gifted with mysterious powers that could spell disaster for the world, grow up ...

In a world where extraordinary powers called *" Benesons "* govern everything; only a boy named Klei...

A college student, Hiroki Nishina, was introduced by his senpai to a part-time job in the light nove...

By the time you see this message, the life-or-death game to reclaim our planet has already begun. Al...

Your sins of past, present, and future, who can you blame but yourself? In the Court of the Underwor...

Legend says that when one’s time is up, only when all traces of love from your previous life must ...

Although Royle is blessed with a good physique, he was told that he had no talent for fighting, and ...

Robin, a seemingly useless summoner whose conjuring attempts are comically futile, secretly dreams o...

Abnormality in his physical exam, a delay in cognitive function, missing memories, Lu Chen was envel...

One day, the fairy of books appeared and told Letty that she was a dying extra character. “Father...

Han Jihyuk, the Necromancer who saved humanity on the Seron Continent, returns to Earth in pursuit o...

I know that the "soft top strong bottom" trope has been relatively prevalent in recent years, but really like how this story does the trope. The bottom isn't some tsundere or looks strong but actually is a huge softie, and the top isn't some pushover nor a wolf in sheep's clothing. Not that I have anything against those types of couples but most stories of this trope have at least one of the above traits, and it's really refreshing how it's done here, ESPECIALLY how natural the rls develops and how they fall for each other. They have real chemistry yall~~

The plot towards the end might be morally dubious, but a story doesn't have to be morally righteous to be decent. I like how the father's viewpoint was given "proper" logical justification, and how the ml didn't forgive the father just by hearing his side of the story(since obviously father was in the wrong), but is still willing to interact with father afterwards, whether it was for giving father a chance or for personal growth. It gives us food for thought on whether we could have done better than father in those circumstances, and overall makes the story much more than just smut.

I like how the author gave a rationale to why the workers were treating mc so we'll even though it is quite obv she isn't the daughter. It explains the actions of the workers quite well.

~spoilers up to ch13 ahead~

The only thing I am a bit urked about is the actions of the mc. It seems she wants revenge for the original daughter, yet is taking no actions to tattletale, and keeps worrying about the duke thinking that she isnt the actual daughter. She then proceeds to flee the mansion after thinking the duke isn't going to accept her, and goes to find the abusers by herself? Like what was she doing?

I'm actually not saying that her actions are illogical. Even if it is illogical, since mc is an actual child, it can be shown as her naivety. However the author isn't conveying the mc's thoughts at all.


If I were to craft the story about the mc while maintaining the plot from ch1-13 so far, I would do this:

- mc wants to seek revenge for the original daughter, therefore she steals the keepsake and goes to the duke

- however due to the mistreatment she has experienced and her guilt of impersonating her best friend, she is extremely scared of the duke not believing her words, and would instead accuse her of stealing the keepsake.

- Therefore she decides to lay low for now, since if the daughter exists, her abuser wouldn't be able to send anyone impersonating the real daughter

- after she misunderstood the duke, thinking that he knows that she isn't the real daughter and about to kick her out, she panics and tries to think of another way to get revenge.

- she thinks about how the abusers were going to the imperial ball, and thinks maybe she can get her revenge by announcing the misdeeds of the abusers about killing the duke's daughter in front of everyone.

- (honestly it's pretty hard to justify why tf she went to the abusers but this is the best my small brain can do. Maybe I would use cartoonish drawings to show the naivety of the plan, implying that this plan was likely not going to be feasible)

- but before she could even start, her plan fails when she was blocked outside the venue. She tries to get in by luring the guards away, telling them to go find the abuser, the only person she knew was at the ball, but it backfires on her


Lol anyways that's what I would do. Spent way too long typing this out haha