
WHY IS THAT WHENEVER I FIND SOMETHING GOOD TO READ ITS ALWAYS ONGOING IMA CRY FOR THESE CLIFF HANGERS !!
Y’know the first thought I got when I saw the first chapters? He is a broke version of cale WAHAHAHAH it’s funny how they have same hair color but he’s fckin broke. Second, even though he’s the MC, broo look so much like a side character!!! Even till the end !! WAHAHA he’s vibes, he’s looks and everything is much more like the support characters in another stories, y’know how each MC have their distinctive styles? This one lol the MC looks is to look forward for, that’s why I like this.
He is not your typical MC who will get strong so much just because of plot amor, he’s growth are well-written and even he’s money making. He just doesn’t hit a jackpot through one business, instead we saw how he carefully built he’s fundings.
Second, the growth of his people. I saw some comments who are not satisfied with his strength nor his wits but consider how now only him grows stronger but also his people. This is my first time seeing that even commoners are being trained and willing to protect this country. It’s not just the MC who’s growing but his county itself.
Third, just wait for the story to flow, honestly i could depict how they will introduce the third prince. I laughed out loud reading the last ch. 91 of his plans HAHAHA it may not me that well-written especially when explaining his plan but that’s how they keep wanting to read the next chapter.
And so, I would still rate this 5 star. This kind of stories who have hundreds of other similar plot proved its own way of doing and I seriously loved it. People love stories between ronian and victor, im sure they prefer that but that’s already way tooo common so ima stick to this I can’t for this to finish so i can read it again.
Oh t/n i just finished reading star fosters swordsmaster, that’s why I’m really happy i found this cause i definitely need something more relaxing and less dark cause STS hurted me so much

THIS IS SO FREAKILY GOOD!!!!! This has been in my want to read list and idk why i keep skipping it but I’m happy I did, now I read them when season 1 ended.
Y’know I’m one of those guys who really hate romance in these kind stories right?! But for once!!! IMMM SOOO INTO THEM idk if what they feel is only a familial love for each other but I don’t mind if they ended up together, red-girl aint your typical girl character, she’s just really there for him huhu
Next, the story build up, the character development, and even with adding a characters are greatly written. The emotions, the faces of the rich and poor, the dead eyes of the children and the people was drawn so weelll that even if marcella looks good now, the pain and stress in her eyes are still highly depicted, reminded me again how scary the world was for women in the past
In short, this is 1000000/10, now for his next journey, I hope he can find a friend in his age and is equal to him. A brother he can trust his back no matter what happened, I’m already happy with that 0.01% romance? But a bromance? We need that, he need that

I so agreeeee, especially the romance part, mostly I cringed when a love interest was introduced in a action story, This is the first time I fully rooted for a childhood friend to be the FL, I got all worried and all when the noble lady starts scheming but nope MC knows who he needs to devote his feelings.
I freaking love the "confession", author really cooked with that one, FL not knowing what it's symbolize, The MC fully know what it means but didn't explain it, knowing they are not ready. There's no 'I like you's" and cheesy words but damn the feeliiiingggss.

I keep skipping this cause of the hated comments about amy and I do absolutely hate harem or romance in this type of story but this one are literally so cute amy may developed such feeling but she also know her place and doesn’t really act annoying, she’s just a spoiled powerful young girlll and EVERYONE KNOWS WHO’S REALLY THE END GAME HERE, IT’S OUR RIAN AND SHINORA!!! WAHAHAH THEY ALREADY MADE VOWS AND MEETING PARENTS. That’s what I thought so please stop making them so manly what we need is bromance not romance. Oh also, we sometimes want to read the backstory of the parents of some powerful mc sometimes right, you can just think of them as the story we don’t get in other but then seriously more bromance please WAHAHAHHAAH
Oh and marcia, idk why but you are annoying me so can you just fck off. There are lots of strong adults here, at-least give them some screen time, focusing only on the MC iz boring nowadays, even if not just the MC at-least have justice to rian ahahha doesn’t matter if can’t use schema, make him OP tooo cause I’m starting to feel bad for him
How do you make the MC look like a Main character, make the enemy old and ugly WAHAHAHAHAH i know this is part of his growth but seriously where are his people, help him out!!!! At least try intervening the ugly mage!! Anyways i just really loved the MC’s look, it’s so ordinary