I like it. You know how in comics there's alert lines when they get surprised? That weird bolt of hair is like a signifier that he's always alert when he's with her. How he takes notes of what she does to experience the world around her and he expounds on that and adds more for her to 'see.'
It's so lovely.











I've reread this so many times but it still makes me giggle. Agh. So adorbs