Idk, I felt it was all a bit sudden, but maybe because it was a short story. I feel like it could’ve been a bit more backstory. I also don’t like the pacing. But I don’t think that this is bad story it could just be is all. Sex scene were hot ngl
I’m glad nothing happened, like when did having sex after knowing each other for 2 seconds become so normalized. WHAT HAPPEND TO SLOW BURNSSS…
I love how I said I was gonna let it marinate but I’m here every Friday morning
Realll
Noooo pls don’t have sex yet, it’s too early. Me want suspense
I’m going to let this marinate, one chapter a week is not enough
I know the build up/ chemistry is going to be insane. I hope they wait to have sex!
The body proportions??? I’m gonna pretend like I don’t see it though because I like the story. Anywho what is with all the edging and cliffhangers???