
The story is sad and not completely realistic, but cmon! U chose to read this manga! No where does it say that it's based on real life. Appreciate the art! Dang man like cmon...dang y'all got me sad. Imma go read an article about puppies

I don't think so. When you write a script you need to think of the characters arch. That is, the process that the main character goes through and the difference between them at the beggining and at the end. That is what makes a story feel like it was worth it or not.
This story is well made, not rushed, and the arch is clear. The problem is that the arch, which should have brought a great difference in the characters life or feelings or way to look at life, was only that he has his hair seven centimeters longer. Everything else is just the same. That is what makes this story seem like it is missing something, that the writer could not convey properly that change in him.
All I could think about was the smell of the onions after they ate them and how awkward it would be
Omgggg im not the only one!!!