I did like the story I found it quite sad but rather confusing is he dead, alive are all a dream.
normally something like this would weird me out but I found it adorable and cute like omg loved it
I personally really like chapters 1 to 2 and 6 to 7 but chapters 3 to 5 didn't particularly like it felt like it took a total 180.
The first story I really liked because the writer managed to make a sad story into a happy ending.
I really like the last page of the second chapter I also liked it in the second story when he told him to sit he did it straight away.
This is how I felt