
akiraamira ur an angel ToT
and people were right it's a great scene. maybe it's just because I've been a yaoi veteran for too long, but a lot of sex scenes out there feel samey or obligatory, like the only emotion I feel reading them is "yep, that is indeed a depiction of sex I guess". this one on the other hand I feel is a hall of famer. just my opinion...

when the author is going on yet another tangent about side characters I dont care about I just kinda skim the chapter...so imagine my surprise :') but tbh the main couple is wearing me out too, it may be time to drop. what do y'all think? its just hard to imagine what audience this is for anymore...

I'm not going back to count but it feels like we've been stuck in the flashback longer than the present day( ̄へ ̄)literally feels like padding to me. not to mention that while maybe he wasn't *technically* a child the old mate viewing him as one/acting as a parental figure at first is still a massive turn off imo (⊙…⊙ ) when we get back to the present imma pretend everything but the critical plot points didnt happen lmao
if some kind soul could pls fix ch4....