Fujo Hater's Topics (135)

What does is it supposed to look like

thats because hes like 14-15

No real

It is boring, and no, you don't have to be a smut-centric reader to really not like this story.

The plot itself is short, and simple, sure, but the story and storytelling is repetitive, it basically circled on one issue and milked it dry by showing 3 timelines and 2 perspective, but despite all that, the misunderstanding was never even explained nor cleared.

Secondly the characters aren't even that interesting. Yes they're absolutely beautifully drawn and I've nothing to say to that, but they really have not much going on in their personalities.

MC is the typical non-communicative, anxious, overthinking black cat, and the ML is the typical rich-and-famous lovestrucked golden retriever.

On top of that, their romance isn't even deeply-rooted. ML liked MC only bc he was pretty and cute, then suddenly we see ML is already head-over-heels over someone he found pretty in a bar whom he coincidentally met again on the bus like it's fate.

I'm in a 5-year relationship with my partner and we love hating each other like siblings on days end, and I can say with certainty that the story is closer to a disney teen romance plot than actual reality.

Note: as this is written, and not verbal please understand that this is toned purely as an objective criticism to the story and not at all personal. Take each words with a grain of salt.

Did you read the story? I think you've misunderstood some of the plot. Yeah it was fast paced but it's not as tasteless as you claim, in my opinion.

I can understand the milked dry part. But I personally enjoyed it, mainly because I like seeing what everyone was thinking a feeling. So I didn't mind the repetitiveness at all, so that is up to personal opinion. And the misunderstanding was explained and cleared???

How are you going to say they have no personalities but then go on to exactly explain what their personalities are? We see both of them go through personality changes due to their relationship and the time that passed. I personally relate to the MC a lot personality wise. And the ML is very expressive. So again up to personal opinion I guess? Also they're called tropes for a reason, so it's a little odd of you to use their trope as a way to prove the story is boring?

There was a time skip with the ML developing feelings, we saw that part in the MCs POV first. Yeah he thought he was pretty and that's why he was interested but then he spent a lot of time getting to know him and then he actually fell for him. I don't know if you didn't notice it as I was also a little confused on how fast he fell before I realized the time skip. It was executed a bit poorly. But if you did notice, I think the time skip is perfectly fine, but again could've been done better, cause it's a short manhwa and the story is mainly based on their reconciliation. The flashbacks are just their background story and for context. Plus lots of people have coincidental meetings that lead to them becoming friends or lovers it's not that far-fetched. This story is also way more realistic then the majority of BLs I've read on here. Although I don't have relationship experience to back me up, this is a fictional story, it needs some coincidences and drama to make it interesting. Which I personally enjoyed.

You say you are just giving "objective criticism" and it's "nothing personal" but most of your points is personal opinion. You've went out of your way to respond to someone who disagrees with your opinion on the story. From your comment I don't think you are the smut-crazy "horndog" OP was referring too. I don't think you are being malicious but you do present yourself as a little arrogant and condescending. OPs definitely making a bold statement but it was obviously rhetorical and light hearted, no need to come blaze of glory talking "objectively" about how much you didn't like the story they liked. It was boring for you personally and that's totally fine. You're defending yourself for no reason, you can just rate it what you think it's worth and maybe write your own opinion and
move on. No need to go around telling people they're wrong. You could've just said "I personally found it a bit bland and repetitive, and no not because there wasn't a sex scene every chapter lol" and them boom we got a light hearted conversation where you both expressed your opinions on this story lol

Note: As you said there's no verbal tone, so I want to clarify that I'm not talking down to you. I don't think you are a bad person, I'm not trying to attack you. I just found your response to a light hearted comment a bit condescending. And even if you add a note that you don't mean to be, you can still sound arrogant. I hope you find a more entertaining story for your personal taste ♪ (^ω^ )

Sorry I kinda TL;DR this. I would've loved to discuss this and get into the nitty gritty but I'm afraid I quite literally already forgot the story... it's that forgettable to me :(

GOT ME FUCKED UP YALL CANT JUST DO THAT

NAH FR, like awwww he said he'll wait. BITCH 2 YEARS?? ngl I wish I had a relationship like that LMAO