
Keith's "redemption story" (if that's what you wanna call this) is so friggin weird-- like one minute he treats my boy Yeonwoo like trash, calls all omega where's and is rude. then he's nice and cares and then the next he's back to calling all omegas whores. and then after the boy Yeonwoo gets sick of the treatment he leaves and all of a sudden Keith's back to being "desperately in love with Yeonwoo and caring" again. like PICK ONE ROUTE AND GO WITH IT MAN.
personally I would have liked to see Keith have one stable personality + view and over time it slowly transforms ( like he thinks omega are objects, sleeps with yeonwoo and yeonwoo believes keith cares for him buts proven wrong. bla bla bla over time yeonwoos anger (which should've been more stable too>:0) starts to make keith realize he's a shit person and work on inproving)

God i hate relationships like this "this guy harrased me and then sexualy assaulted me!! why does my heart beat faster when I'm around him?!?!?!" God its so fucking sick no sane person falls for their attacker. he literaly went from being terrified of him tonbwing in love in less than an episode god the top is awful hes such a shitty person htjrbfbf

I like this, i like that the mc is a character who can stick up for himself and stand up to the jerk of an alpha, but the story telling is really all over the place ㅠㅠ I barley know whats going on anymore and thibgs go crom calm to intense in a matter if minutes w/o much explanation ╥﹏╥ it kinda reminds me of one of those wattpad fanfics lol. its good tho so imma stay here :>
I like femdom stories because I'm big gay but shes.... she's awful. I only just started reading it and I already want to drop it. like he constantly is actively fighting against her and telling her no but she pushes and ignores his boundaries. and then has the gall to ignore and punish him because SHE messed up and did something he wasn't comfortable with? I'm dissapointed but does anyone know of any good non abusive femdom stories or Yuri stories?
Drop it right now man. It gets SO MUCH WORSE. i read it to the end and i swear im going to throw up. Poor fucking hyunwoo man. I hope he gets therapy after what she did to him my god.
oh boy good thing I dropped it the minute I wrote this