
okay, maybe this is not the best translation; I think you could use a proofreader's help, so the dialogues are more coherent. but you're still doing more than most of us ever could, even given the raws. I, personally, am very grateful you picked it up and that you're trying your best to translate the chapters, otherwise I could never read the continuation. hopefully you'll find a helper, but don't worry, the translations are still easy to follow/understand as they are, you're doing great.

the potential is definitely there, the characters are pretty, and it's a well-drawn webtoon in general, but... where is the plot? there's some, but it's hidden, shows up every 5 chapters, maybe. all we get is their dreamy sexy times, their relationship seems to be even worse than at the beginning, progress who? at this rate, their group is gonna disband within the next 10 chapters.

changing their chinese names to some american bullshit is so weird to me... I hate white people

yea, it feels racist to me............ I know they are trying to help the readers remember the characters' names (because many of them are probably not used to foreign names), but... that's just awful. it is still a chinese webtoon about chinese people, why robbing us and messing up with an important part of the culture. if it's an effort for a reader to remember a chinese name, that's on them. make that effort or read an american webtoon instead.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAH, I can't, they are so sweet