The story is good, but the flow is messed up .. there are too many random moments
Why would you kill the brother?!?! ╥﹏╥
Only just few seconds after you kill the brother, but now you also kill the mother?!?!?!?
Wow .. just wow
I was actually shock than sad
What with this story ... I'm crying than shocked, and crying again
Not even just the mother, the unborn child too!! Girl can't catch a break
I hope they keep this pace with no unnecessary drama or prolong it too much.
I don't mind if they want to put like hundred female characters but please make them to be NOT an annoying character.
If you really want to have an annoying, flirty character then just make only one, not all of them.
It such a pity, the story is ok
Is this worth reading?
Yes!
50/50. the beginning is good but now its getting annoying
No
Ahhh I read this too soon .. now I have to wait
Should I marinate it first and come back later?
Sure
I always wonder, if she wearing a hairband or her hair just look like she's wearing one?
A hairband made of mesh? But I'm not sure.
It's her hair
I guess that a real knife and someone escaping to the secret path
Maybe you can change the situation, but you can't change someone's personality
If they evil, then they're evil