This story is so Cliched and very boring to me. I literally just skimmed thru the last 12 chapters or so just to finish it. The art changed but wasn't a deal breaker for me. It was just so bland. Honestly, I cringed so hard from the alpha wanting to pay for everything and was like...just you breathing is all I need. Yeah, no. Omega with an oh so sad past. Villains with an diabolical laugh. Check. Cliched beyond belief.
I normally stay away from these way too long stories. Most times than not it's is dumb drama after dumb drama that could have been cleared up quickly with just a little communication.
I'm not to far into this story and have decided to read it for idiotic laughs. Lot of skipping around from scene to scene instead of simply showing how the person ended up getting themselves kidnapped or some other such thing.
Got to the part little bro is getting choked out by his partner he's been cheating on and I'm over here just laughing bc that's the weakest choke out I've ever witnessed. Little bro is having a full on dialogue while being choked. That man must have noodle arms for how long winded little bro became during that time
Ehhh felt like....this wasn't anything new to read. Also, the end felt rushed. Like it wasn't really going anywhere so a quick wrap up to end it. They absolutely could of cashed in on him getting pregnant and showing a bit of family life. I've always thought...how dare you show the 'money maker shot' during sex but just skips right on over the possible pregnancy and baby and just ends the story. That needs to be illegal










Beta turned Alpha is adorable.
Loved that the omega didn't have feminized or childish body type. We need more realistic omega body types in omegaverse stories!