This really needed to be longer. It was really cute! But the shit hwan did bruh the 180 was too crazy considering he kidnapped haejin, drugged him, got him fired, got him evicted, cut off all his connections, didn't let him outside, PHYSICALLY HURT HIM (the arm) and said he wouldn't actually care about the baby and just needed a kid. Kerri in mind the reason he was doing it in the first place was because his grandma wouldn't habd over the company to him if he didn't and we never saw that plot come full circle. It's implied that his grandma just wanted to teach him about how important love is but that's never elaborated upon and we NEVER see him inherit the company or even any talk of that. So in the long run it seems like he just treated haejin like shit for no reason. We also never got to see why Hwan even likes Haejin nor did we see Haejin learning more about Hwan like he said he wanted to. All around I give this a 6/10. Could've been a lot better with some time to develop
Oh my god my tummy is doing the second hand embarrassment flips from the BDSM thing. They're both so stupid I love them so much :')
This looks like it's gonna be so cute they don't make bangers like this anymore
To anyone curious, no it doesn't get better but imma ride it out and see how much worse it can get
This kind of story seriously needed more time. The uke seemed to have some really harmful thoughts about bi people and the seme clearly didn't understand much about queer people in general. The uke still calling the seme straight even after he DIRECTLY asked him if he was gay and was told "yes" was really irritating. I could go on a whole tangent about the smaller stuff too. None of this stuff is bad on its own I just wouldn't really liked it to be longer and fit some of the plot points to be fleshed out. It's a shame because this story had a lot of potential
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i agree mostly but i also do understand why nao called yuma straight at that point, because this is a guy who just got out of a straight relationship and has never had any experience with queer relationships at all + nao just having been cheated on by someone who left him for a woman. at that point in the story also, it was implied that yuma only thought to say “yes” because he overheard nao saying that he didn’t want to date men that weren’t explicitly gay.
it’s kinda complicated bc to me, yuma isn’t really straight bc he’s already slowly coming to terms with his feelings (at that time) and they already had sex, but i really do understand nao’s feelings of being scared of being another “experiment”
it’s undeniably true that nao’s ex is just a piece of shit, straight or not.
Guys I'm on chapter 8 rn can someone tell me if this is worth reading because this is giving me icky vibes and it's making it hard to read
Yea the first chapters are hard to get through, dw it only gets better with chapters, the mc goes through character development and the main story is them solving the problem, the romance is on the side stories
GURL THIS IS ALSO ME RN ┗( T﹏T )┛
Wasn't terrible but I hated the switch up