
I would like it much better, if the seme teases the uke a lot more. The uke is a bratty type, so taming him would be a lot more interesting. I'd recommend the seme to say "U want it ? Beg me for it" or "You need to be disciplined". Some punishment for 'being disloyal' ? Ouh wait... Is this BDSM ? I forgot, it doesn't feel like one.

You should check this list out
http://www.mangago.zone/home/mangalist/603799/
Wait... Lemme predict. They go on a trip, feeling good, then they will have the kinky sex together. Maybe light bondage ?