This is the shit I like!!!! I need authors to understand THIS TYPE OF WRITING AND IN CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IS WHAT NEEDS TO BE DONE MORE OFTEN!!!!!!!
Hmmm I’m shocked it’s rated so low I’m confused cause so far it’s very well executed
Yeah fr fr fr
It’s a bit fast paced but it’s not a bad story. Love when ukes are written with a damn back bone and the seme here is a lovely green waving flag
This story been going on since 2020 and hasn’t made any progress I feel like. I’m trying to stick with it because I think they’re cute together and I *see* the vision but damn I feel like I need the series to pick it up a bit more at this point
I think it feels like that because it genuinely updates much slower/ with shorter chapters than what we're typically used to. The story itself is good, I just wish we got longer chapters or more frequent updates.
Keep in mind they're an independent artist doing all this on their own dime and time. If you need something to fill the space between updates, follow their Instagram.
I desperately want this one to come back! I hope there’s smut because the sexual tension is there
Damn the author basically said, alrighty now lemme hurry up and wrap this shit up. Yall they were tiiiiired of writing this story lmfao
So I’m gonna need this storyline to start coming through cause plot wise it’s lacking right about now imo. we’re on chapter 22 and I feel like we’re getting peanuts at this point.
I finally got around to reading this story and the author came through once again! Definitely one of the better writers. This is so beautiful, wholesome, and well written where you actually connect with the characters and the story progresses nicely
Literally the as author ruined their little relationship and the build up by adding all that damn rape in the end…. Rough kinky sex is one thing but non consensual rape is in a whole different ball park. Is it so hard for these authors to not include the seme being a rapist as their character trait