He's almost endearing in his childlike way, yet beneath that facade or should I say front lurks a killer instinct so deeply ingrained it feels unnaturally..natural
Fit so well and i love this struggle like we are literally seeing how the semi falls first ans his struggle such rare find
Up a couple chapters! Im not sure which is the clean version but 1-9 chapters were amazing translated the repition
1-26 need proof reading the translation was off but like THANK YOu tho for ur hard work no judging just asking if there is someone that does have the skill would be amazing im just greatful its being translated.i absolutely love that this is a nice find cus its not often the Semi is the main story teller and we see his inner struggle cant wait for more
I was shook like he looks the apart actually really like the art style giving me a hmcharater from tekken and some other games i played . But like hes spicy! I need more
There making out ( the rich one) to seem so victimizes as well like rich cant get the girl etc like bro had a chance ans he ruined it by playing it out to be a debt collector like wtf ugh
I think the author is trynna depict how fucked up beom taeha’s Idea of love is, that’s why he manipulated her and tried to get her to love him through pity, cuz he thought he’d never win over mincheol. He wanted to monopolize her, not just love her but control her and have her be obsessed with him. I’m not defending him or his actions just trynna explain the authors intent, or how I interpreted it. I think he’s realizing how pathetic he is, mincheol will always have a place in her heart as her first love. He’s so young and immature that makes him feel insecure. Maybe he’s hopefully realizing loving her isn’t lying to her but we shall see, I’m still trynna piece his intentions together lol
Thats actually so well said
Well said.
Giving us an actual story, lmao.
Well, scratch that — I’ve read quite a few like this, which unfortunately sucks because they have so much potential.
At least this one gives a slight bit more. I was so confused at the beginning because I thought Raphael knew he was a rat. He mentioned it early on, so I’m kind of perplexed as to how all of a sudden he doesn’t know.
This is what I mean when I say there’s so much potential, yet a lot of detail feels missing. We keep skipping years, and while it’s okay to do that, I see that you want to focus more on the smut stuff yummm lol— which is fine — but if you’re going to include a real story, you better believe there’s going to be critique. And a mafia at that ima judge cus u dont mess with my mafia type of yaois i live for those!
That said, I was still able to follow along easily. Now that it’s clear he doesn’t know, I’m more invested in Raphael and the struggle he’s facing. I wonder how he’s going to feel once Rowan tells him about his family.
I also feel like Rowan is really confused about where he wants to go with all of this.
Anyway, continue on.
I’m waiting for the next chapter.
Originally I thought he knew he was a police rat, but now that I’ve read the chapters, I think when he called him a “rat” he meant he knew he was Daniel’s rat (which isn’t wrong either because technically Daniel did send him so he could spy on Raphael).
In the author’s notes at the end of the season they mention that they’d been working on this series since like January 2024, so I was a bit baffled that there seems no editor was available to steer it in a more cohesive way.
Apparently when it debuted, it ranked pretty high and on l*zhin Spanish it also premiered in the top 10, so it has its merits.
Overall the story is understandable, it just jumps times too much and acts like it doesn’t. For example, the chapter where Ian is reminiscing over the “cat” comment, the narrative made it seem like it had just happened, but we’ve been told that it had been 3 years. Just little things like that. I’m hoping that season 2 they get an editor (or a better one) and they tighten the narrative.
Ahhh i see- totally agree, this is essentially what I meant in my comment too. I had a feeling this story was popular, but I didn’t realize how big it had gotten on L*zhin! You really made this much clearer for me. Now it makes sense – I did feel like the story had a lot of potential, but my issue was that it often left too much for the reader to figure out on their own. And to be honest i dont mind i quite like using my brain lol BUt The simple narrative style could have been more complex, to give it that cohesive feeling, instead of leaving too many gaps that make you guess what’s going on. This creates issues later on which can also add confusion as it then leaps to a time gap not going further into detail. It’s nice to have some mystery, but when it’s pushed too far, it can end up feeling more confusing than intriguing.
Now I see it was more about the editor (or lack thereof), which really clears things up. Despite this, I’m still enjoying it, and I do think you're right about the “rat” comment—it does seem more like he meant Daniel’s rat, which adds to the lack of cohesion I was feeling as it gave me the impression that all this time he knew and still kept furthering there relationship . Among other scenarios.As you mentioned, it feels like certain chunks were introduced but not fully fleshed out or developed later. Hopefully in season 2 they get an editor i second this!
Nooo our ML is actually trying to save him hes realizing what Value and Keeping what u like or love close means hes so new to the world in a way wow i hope he csn break free
Dont read if u havent read the latest chapter!WARNING
Aww, I’m gonna cry! He really held back his anger—there was so much meaning in the way he stared at Nanjo. Like his eyes were saying, 'Look at me. I’m here. Don’t you see me? Can’t you feel my heart?' That glance was filled with conviction, desperation, and anger over the way the MC keeps treating him. He (ML)only shows this vulnerable side to the Mc, and yet the MC has completely misjudged him. I get it started with a contract and maybe he might be convincing himself that ml isnt kind just wants a fun time or liked the other guy-bottom. But i hope he felt happy and saw his kindness. For someone who prides himself on reading people well, he’s totally misunderstood the ML. I hope he finally realizes it—and starts to yearn for him. When the ML gave that sad look and said, 'It’s no fun,' I felt it so deeply. He would’ve regretted everything if he’d gone through with it, but he was too clouded to think straight. What an incredible ML so far. I need more—this chapter has me in pieces!(really like them together there eyes are also so pretty ugh) need more