I can't wait to see this story completed
But as I read the spoiler n summary, we have a lot more flashback about her previous lives to go through? I just want the babies to come sooner ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
Carcel portrait:
Ines portrait:
Will the pacing and tone continues to be this slow? I've gotten bored from 2 chapters but tried hanging on for 30 chapters in case it gets better. Well the story did progress and I get some future plot foreshadowing which made me curious but the storytelling is so monotonous, made it feels lackluster. Is this adapted from a novel? Feels like the storyboard can be improved and less drawn-out.
Too much narration explaining panel, telling reader instead of showing it. Example:
"we drank tea while waiting" - tea picture
"We continued the pleasant talk again while waiting" - picture of everybody smiling and laughing
"I'm happy our family can be together like this" multiple times almost every few chapters. The first few times said by different characters are enough to show their feelings. I get it.
In novel yes use words to describe those but I feel like just drawings should be able to show the atmosphere, feelings, story.
I guess that's the difference between shounen manhwa with rating above 9.3 and this one with rating 9.0. it's a similar issue I have with "volcanic age" manhwa, compared to "return of mount hua sect", "the S-classes that I raised", "story of a low ranked soldier becoming a monarch" etc. they're better adapter into manhwa.
Example of outstanding shoujo manhwa adapted from novel, "my mom entered a contract marriage", "broken ring". The arts are chef kiss
Who the ml and mc in original novel?
Noella was written as heroine at first then author changed her mind and made her dumb villain, and promoted Chloe to be the heroine?
Was it Killian or Aaron the 2nd prince who was ml
Red flag: red flagging
He hot tho
Delulu: I can change him
Our baby: lemme fly my ass across the Atlantic ocean, stalk him, then be his manager to snoop for blackmail material. Sounds like a good plan to be this close to a psycho
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I need fluffy and funny side stories during the peace ┗( T﹏T )┛
The pacing of this manhwa is my cup of tea the fights action flow makes sense and serve a purpose for the plot progression. Plot moves fast comparatively, fighting also doesn't take forever to stretch the series. Authors around the world should understand a finished great story is better than a long drawn-out ongoing one
I wrote a mdzs regression fanfic on AO3 myself because I got frustrated by unfinished stories there, some are ongoing but slow update, some were great but on hiatus or abandoned... My medium length story is at least complete
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It ain't that deep
Just from the title, we should know it's more of a gag than a serious story.
I swear people who hate on this is the same people who don't laugh at crayon shin chan or SpongeBob
Chungmyung most probably the most cracked mc I've read. Cracked as in strong, and cracked as in he's unhinged like he's on crack
is this any good?
Some comment said it's funny but I'm at chapter 11 and already finding it boring. Meek mc, short term characters, repetitive sa attitude from the mob towards the female characters. Also I'm shallow so I need at least ok-looking mc, skeleton gonna get some meat or nah?
Jerkass my baby left and 1st thing he reminisced about is the smex?
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So sad for my baby Dan I can't even fap to the smut
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Credit to author though he/she integrates smut with plot good
I hate when the spared noob villain becomes more evil. Makes me think no value in showing mercy and second chance
Bruh this Philip screw bic is even more bic after tens of chapters（/TДT)/
Peter is just too naive ma sweet boi let mummy take care of u
ngl can't stop watching this trainwreck of a psycho story
I'm only at chapter 9
This bic actor has the look of if daytime star mc is an asshole
Legis Claude Gallahan should become friends and go on widowed daddies trips together
