Su-ah is adorableeee HES SO CUTIE PIE! Juhyeok is handsome and WHO IS THAT OLDER BLONDE MAN WITH THE GLASSES…. I hope to see more of him, like, if he has his own side story yesss YESSSSSS
He reminds me of Nanami!
100% convinced the person that made this has either never felt the touch of a woman, is a womanizer, or is a misogynist neet
Or just has a strange “daddy complex/kink” ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Definitely weird tho ngl
yeah this could easily be written by a fucked up woman with severe daddy issues and kinks too
As a lesbian, ever so often I click on one of these just to see the ridiculousness of it. Granted, yaoi and yuri do include exaggerated bodies / generally weird shit but wow…! straight manhwa is really bottom of the barrel…
It truly is I feel like there’s a couple golden nuggets out there but verrry few and far inbetween
For reallll
??? fym??? shit like this is also common in bl and yuri.
Fym fuck I mean? It was crystal clear, right on your screen for you to read and re-read multiple times over.
Not sure if you caught the part where I openly criticized both yaoi and yuri for doing this, despite that this is worse than the oversexualization in lgbt fiction.
Can someone explain what’s even happening. Story is stretching on and I’m kinda losing the plot! I haven’t read this in months because it was starting to give me fatigue, every chapter just felt like Woo-won complaining about something or the other. I picked it back up and I am nothing but confused. What is happening?
Replying so I get notified when you get an answer lol
I got nothing LOL
I’ve been reading shutline basically since it released and it’s pathetically adorable how obsessed Jay is with Shin. No matter how their relationship seems, Jay would do literally anything for Shin, I feel. Past the extremities of murder. Dude would kill a large percentage of the population for Shin, no questions asked.
I really hope this doesn’t have a tragic ending. I love them so much (▰˘◡˘▰)
yes bro , and its js so funny to me how jay is js giving dih left and right to shin whenever something detrimental happens, like thats his coping mechanism ig
The only good things I liked about this were the art and the dog being adorable.
Alot of things I don’t like, but let’s discuss the obvious part.
The rape at the end was absolutely unnecessary and quite frankly just disgusting.
The story overall feels rather rushed and boring. I feel like if you’re going to do something then do it all the way. If you’re going to create a story then put everything into it. Don’t half ass it or leave things unexplained, or rush into things. Our main characters had sex without even knowing eachother’s names. Seriously. How realistic is that. I mainly skimmed through the sex scenes because I didn’t even feel any chemistry between them.
(Do not reply to me if you’re trying to justify anything wrong with this manhwa, you’re wasting your time, trust me. Ts turned out to be ass and everyone and they mama know it.)
it's not supposed to be realistic. it's a one shot story, ofc it would be rushed plus this is obviously a fap gooner manhwa why are u expecting a top global story line
Baby, a one shot is one chapter, not multiple, I have a right to dish out constructive criticism if I thought it was ass. There was 12 chapters of this but the story or romance wasn’t properly written out. Hence the half assed writing. This is MEANT to be pwp, not pwop. So obviously if you decide to write out a plot and I take the time to read it I’m going to be disappointed that it’s bad.
Unfortunately I’m not a 14 year old gooner degenerate anymore, I will recognize bad writing and weird plot decisions and I will, as the consumer, say it’s bad.
Genuinely seen other authors write better things in an ACTUAL one shot or under 12 chapters it’s really nothing you can say other than the fact that the story and the romance is underdeveloped
you're saying all this while giving it three points despite of it having r4pe scene, what a hypocrite. i wasn't even justifying it, i was saying that this is afap gooner material and not some serious ass top goobal writing story.
Hypocrisy literally doesn’t apply in this context dumbass 3 stars because it had the potential to actually be interesting before it flopped. Put your thinking cap on homegirl.
Regardless it being “gooner material” doesn’t save the multiple points I’ve made. Look at it from a writers standpoint before you type your next reply.
Ts is unwiped ass you cheeks you are not changing my mind
Like genuinely what am I supposed to say sorry I don’t like shitty porn without plot half assed rushed stories??????? Herro.
Why bro licking ts
Also as a small detail.. Shingun literally shaves his armpits for Jay LMFAOOO
Stopped reading at the furry father incest.
But judging from the comments it gets worse.
Also, asbestos, people keep reading because they’re hoping for a better story but clearly there wasn’t a better one