
Man i think i really have the most unpopular opinion here. But the author or the artist of the manhwa just dosen't get the smut scenes. The author really knows how to build tension in the story and have seductive scenes but when it comes to actual sex scenes idk what happens. There is like no context and build up to these in the manhwa like they are in the novel. They should build sexual tension like first stripping him then stimulation and foreplay but the scenes are like: starts with a time skip the character is already naked and getting fingered. Transitions to fucking in like 3 frames. 1 position change throughout the sex scene with time skips in between. The characters are saying the same one line in the whole chapter just diffrent phrasing. There is no orgasm as if none of them are enjoying it. This has happened throughout the manhwa. The sex scenes are sudden, out of place and last for a short while just as we are getting adjusted to the pacing. I think this is the only elaborate sex scene we ever got except for the time they had sex for the very first time, that smut scene was S tier. A build up and proper leading up of the events and proper ending. Idk why i'm yapping so much but i want an elaborate sexy smut scene from these two. (▰˘◡˘▰)

Way to end the season when it was just getting spicier. I hope the chasing arc dosen't have the "i can't get hard without him" bullshit. And i actually hope their's a time skip, jk continues to suffer and dan matures and then they meet outside a coffee shop or sum park or buissness meet and greet etc. Jk begins chasing and dan is mature enough not to fall again and jk starts doing cute stuff dan treats him like how jk treated him previously and he fucking treats him like shit and dan gets kidnapped and jk is ready to sacrifice himself for dan and dan realizes and they have a emotional breakdown and and decide to take things slow. Also their is a new second ml in all of this to fuel jk's desire for dan and create competetion and desperartion for jk to be better, cause if i don't act good enough he'll just choose the other one.

maybe not exactly like this but i definitely want to see jk absolutely falling on his ass and begging dan on his hands and knees for another chance. but dan doesn't fall for it so easily so jk actually has to change. the time skip i do definitely want to see like maybe three years? grandmas dead by now and dan has gotten a good and stable job with either a customer or a cowered whos really interested in dan and treats him right but can tell dan is scared and so he's giving him time and everything dan needs. dan is seriously considering dating this guy and then meets jk again and the real chasing arc begins. jk will definitely be an add the first time but then over time he actually changes. if it's not a long arc i'm dropping fr

(▰˘◡˘▰)Holy hell this is the most grabagest garbabe i've ever read. My precious time, oh my god, how many other stories i could've read in that time and be actually satisfied. 82 chapters wasted, thousands of words i laid my eyes on wasted. HOLY SHIT THIS IS HOT SHIT HOT GARBAGE. If people are coming here thinking there is gonna be a satisfying chasing arc RAHHH run away. If you think mc is gonna act smart RUN AWAY. Mc is the most dumbest dumb fuck to enter this dumb fuck story to ever have dumbed omfg. Hes so stupid he's literally a pushover who has a screw loose and should be in a mental hospital along with his boyfriend ass psychotic motherfucking dodoass king lover. No i'm not exaggrating, i wish i was joking. If you think this will have that jerk seme who falls in love and chases uke, NO. NO IT DOES NOT. Not in the way thats satisfying. YOU ARE WASTING YOU'RE TIME.
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All they did this chapter was send a message and throw a can. The pacing is so bad, like there is NOTHING happening in these chapters. I can't even remember what happened last chapter because there is nothing memorable happening. There is not one thing i can name from the chapters that caught my eye, it is so dead.

Ok but "you can't expect a neglected child to be a proper adult" hit hard. Many people around me have turned out this way. If you ever feel your childhood or any other period in life is affecting your current life too much don't hesitate to reach out. Help is out there

This is all the parents fault tho. Bringing a chaotic kid to their work place which is not a kid friendly place, giving praises to other's children (albeit how much Andy deserved it) in front of Derrick as well as calling him friendless now in his adulthood in front of total strangers or his arch nemesis? Mom & dad ain't saint & needs a teaching as well in parenting. How can he maintain a good relationship with his family who insults him like this?
All the parents in this story are kinda hopeless ngl
READ THIS. SHIT IS CRAZY GOOD
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