Art fantastic. Story mid. Pacing horrible.
The pacing reminds me of special season recap episodes for a TV series.
Or like when they would do a OAV of manga that fasts forward through the plot or skips showing anything but the highlights of the series published so far.
I think it’s ick that the ML is like 24? Falling in love with a girl less than 16 years old???
I dunno when this was published. And I know this kind of age gap romance was pushed a lot especially the farther in time you go back. But …. Ick. Ruins any romantic potential for me.
Sister’s end was a crock of shite. It just drips with that annoying shoujo story telling where after a certain point in the story nothing truly tragic is supposed to happen and even the villain was just misunderstood but finds the true meaning of happiness with the power of love and rose scented unicorn queefs
The older sister literally tortured the FL in every possible way. She literally burned people alive. These are on the same black flag level as torturing small animals. A person that grows from a child with that kinda psychology is not mentally well or safe unchecked in society.
So for her to ‘find herself’ or whatever tf you wanna call it doing forced labor in prison is so weird and I don’t understand whyyyyyyyy?Add that? To the story???
Is it because we can’t have one of the kids parents be an unredeemable psycho?
Then the author shouldn’t have written her like that in the first place???? This redemption would have actually added really cool and interesting depth to the story then.
Those who are about to die, why are you hot? Gretel get tf out of here with that manbun vibe hair.
This is healing and causing me psych damage at the same time.
Siiiiiigh the art be so beautiful that I feel it’s almost an insult to humanity. Some of these characters have transcended mere mortal looks and become an evolved species.
Jc, you could take Gio’s blood and make a fortune developing it as a ED drug. His dick probably has callouses from constant friction.
I now better understand why his employees are so used to Gio’s dick being out all the time. He really. Does. Not. Stop.
Bro you deserve to have your sister dump you.
In not on his side by any stretch of the imagination but like that was pathetic.
Did you even know what you were going there for you sad sack of shite? She’s not your dog being babysat by a neighbor and you can just pick her up when you decide to drop by.
Arrogant, entitled, selfish pos.
Man that girlie is punching waaaaay out of her weight class.
I am interested in how Alicia is gonna rip her a new asshole but at this point….
…like we been bamboozled, hoodwinked, tricked, lied to!
WTF is this? I can get this side quest plot from literally at least a thousand OTHER stories.
I CAME TO SEE A FULL UNDIAGNOSED PTSD TAKING NO SHIT BITCH FROM HELL making people piss their petticoats.
SUCH a vibe wasted. (I’m going to marinate this if I can manage. I feel like a buzzkill just complaining almost every update)
Just when I think I’m a full jaded black soul bitch, I read something like this and I get humbled. Now I’m a just a wee ugly crying lil’ bitch.┗( T﹏T )┛
Okay I’ll be honest,(okay I’m usually honest on here anyway) this isn’t peak.
It’s really barely mid. BUT it entertains. And so far, what happens makes sense within the context!
Like MC turning in her tutor as soon as it was safe to! LOGIC is logicing!
Any other story would have dragged that plot line out for at least a couple chapters! Even if in reality it really doesn’t make any sense to let some random bitch beat you!