TO THE NOVEL READERS, WAS THE NAME OF COMMANDER OF GUARD'S ALREADY REVEALED IN THIS PART???? CUZ I REMEMBER IT WAS REVEALED IN LAYER SCENE WHEN THE 1ST COMMANDER WAS MAD AT HIM OR AM I TRIPPIN
Later
MUCH later
Yes. Kinda sad they revealed it so soon.
I meant yes, it was revealed later in the novel.
RIGHT???? I was so mad (?) that I didn't have time to give a fuck that the two finally kissed bro
Like, when I was reading the novel, I was constantly on edge about finding out what his true name was and why he hate it to the point that he wants to change it into y'know. AND HERE IT WAS JUST CARELESSLY REVEALED LIKE THAT
THE BLACK RING GANG ARE NOT BAD GUYS THEY'RE JUST BEING USED AS PAWNS THEY ALL DESERVE TO LIVE A NORMAL LIFE PLEASE
OR AT LEAST JOIN THE PROTECTORS BRO, Y'ALL DON'T DESERVE THIS
Some are a bitch
Yeah... But still y'know
He's so fucking obsessed with him bro like, drinking his nosebleed??? If Flynn was a girl would he also drink his period blood-
Bruhh u thinking too much gurl
I CAN'T HELP IT, I LOST IT WHEN HE DRANK HIS NOSEBLEED
ur so right
Lolol he absolutely would, the man is a freak for Flynn. I kinda get it because his bodily fluids are the only thing that helps his karma sickness, but for some reason it didn't occur to me that blood would be part of it. Cue Hugo collecting bottles of Flynn's spit, sweat, and tears.
Am I the only one who wants to see the girl he was married to??? Like she wasn't even shown there or anything and I kinda want to see her reaction to the contractual marriage and all. Plus I also want to see his dad's reaction to their marriage. Like, by what was shown, it's clear that he'd be homophobic too and say "what a disgrace" cuz like it was said that he was the only heir right?
Like, their story is so cute bro but it was only like that because the story was focused in the internal problem of the couple, if the story included what I have said, I think it would be more complex
Why are people in the comments so annoying
12 year olds, or low IQ people that either read about a word and throw it out everywhere, or unable to think and extract results. Unfortunately the majority is like that.
Lmao what a harsh way to say it, but it's true, really.
They don't have reading comprehension.
Nahh we just saying it how we see it rn, Ml made stupid ass mistakes therefore we say he stupid
On what aspect do you say he was stupid?
Oh probably chosing to threaten the Mc instead of fucking idk talk? Mf got a smart mouth and a brain but can't use it for shit and ended up almost dying
Didn't you fucking see their fucking interaction last time? Do you think MC would fucking trust his smart ass and LISTEN to him talk?
Mc didn't listen because he lied to Mc if it weren't for those two spirits Mc wouldn't have known about ML's plan, and you forget how he fucking went and threatened his family without trying to find a better idea to try to get him to join?.If he had open his mouth in the first place Mc wouldn't be in such a problem
You want them to talk, now you want ML to shut his fucking mouth?
Like you're basically saying this story shouldn't exist in the first place
First of all, ML didn't lie, he just didn't reveal himself because he had an ulterior motive, the two is different from each other. Second, now that MC know what his motives are plus ML knowing that he hates their organization, do you think a straightforward talk would patch them up? No? What then, should he say that he'll straight out destroy the organization to make him join? ATP he wouldn't believe him either. So the only believable choice is to threaten him with his family. But didn't you fucking read? He was considering of joining him because he thought that it would protect the fox guy but it was all ruined again thanks to the other guys taking the kid.
Additionally, when they fucking threatened to chop of the kid's feet, ML stopped them and negotiate with the kid without knowing that he and MC are related with each other.
MC misunderstood the scene and act out on the spot to protect the kid but the fucking side character tried to fight him causing MC to be triggered and apparently blame ML.
Don't fucking bark if you can't bite.
Don't fucking Bark when you can't bite bruh what is this an irl argument???
ML literally did everything wrong and was surprised when MC got mad and disagreed..like even after threatening to go after MC's fam. I didn't say ML Should have shut his mouth instead he should use the fucking thing to communicate better if he wants actual progress with MC and not just "bitch join, or die" like?? Who in this world will trust him after that.
And I did fucking Read and ML is stop stupid bc he us
I know this is all for the plot but you can't really defend the guy when he acted a certain way and then expected an outcome like he wanted. He made dumb decisions, which lead to these chaos so he should really be honest in the first place and if MC didn't join after using the peaceful method don't fucking go using violence and expect nothing but agreement. It's just making things worst
Yeah it shows that you still don't read and are just looking at the drawings ^^
Even the drawings shows the ML is dumb well for the last chapters at least now he's making progress
Violence? Oh please, MC was the violent one, I didn't mean it in a bad way but do you fucking think that ML should just take it? Then should we just change the ML to have a dense personality? Wow then he shouldn't recruit MC too then, and let's fucking think, he shouldn't destroy their organization too then because you fucking don't like to see violence. Oh maybe we should change the genre of the story too then, maybe they shouldn't have powers right? Because that's too fucking violent.
As I fucking said, he was CONSIDERING of joining to PROTECT the fox guy, but the other guy from their organization fucking ruined it, as well as the other spirit (when he knew his secret). He he was using his thing called mouth and his fucking head to get close to him in the first place to gain his trust and maybe fucking reveal his intentions when he gained his trust but they just had to ruin it right?
You're just fucking blaming ML and not fucking analyzing the situation.
I'm not justifying the violence but making sense of the act.
Literally stop twisting my words I'm sick and tied of it. I literally said ML made dumb decisions so he shouldn't be surprised it got out of control. And Whose fault is it that MC fought back? And got "violent".He was pushed and pressureed by the ML even though he refused to Join ML with words, It's ML that decided to pushed MC to that route.
I never said anyone was violent you reading Maniac, I said Why is ML in destress when obviously none of of this could have happened if he didn't go and be reckless about MC existence which is what lead to those fuckers exorcist to get a signal and found the kid and straight up almost committed a crime and get away with it.
Don't go after me when you don't even understand what I'm trying to say it's annoying
Bro it was not entirely ML's fault that MC "fought back." It was because he knew that he's an exorcist (or whatever) and can see that MC had a traumatic background with them. I'm not saying that ML didn't have fault in making him "fought back", but what I fucking hate that you're just singling out ML and saying he's fucking dumb when various factors affected the action causing a force to arise.
Also, I can't understand what you mean in your second paragraph, fix it then let's argue again.
Bro tbh I was just annoyed with your first comment, you be acting like shit. I had a bad day and just went along with it.
I don't feel like continuing this argument anymore. don't reply, let's just go our separate ways
Exactly! the way they're talking, so annoying!!!
I'll recommend this to my cousin with the disguise that it is the cutest story ever
If only I hadn't injured my hands then I would roll over the floor and throw all my things out while crying
That white haired guy(WHG) is only using the mc. I might've been on his side if him and the mc stayed as friends cuz WHG did hang out with mc with his best interest but it was all fucked up when they fucked like mf, are you a fucking virgin? Isn't it a normal courtesy to loosen up before putting your dick into any hole? Like I know mc said it doesn't hurt but omfg you fucking knew he was hurting and all you thought was "he must like me so much." WHG only apologizes for his own convenient, not for actually being sincere for the mc. Also, everytime he said he was creeped out by the black haired guy (BHG), I admit that he was kind of worried about mc as well but most of it is out of unrealized jealousy. He was being jealous and alarmed that someone might be better than him and take away mc.
Now onto BGH, I'll point out what I think is a red flag before I say why I choose him.
First of, he is only granting mc's wish, it's most likely that he doesn't really have romantic feelings for the mc but we'll see. Second is that he's creepy, yeah I know, I'm also curious on where are mc's dad is and on the sudden turn over of the people around mc just because of BHG. Third, he's super clingy, it's usually good but if you're introducing yourself as mc's brother with that clinginess.. yeah no, it's different though if it's just the two of them alone. Fourth is when he "dropped" the fucking phone, bruh, you're wasting money like, where tf are you getting it from anyway???
I choose the BHG because first of all, he is gentle with the mc, idrc if it's just for the wish but it's better than seeing mc eat up his words while being in actual pain because he's afraid of being abandoned. Like he's gentle with him emotionally and physically, mc actually felt good for the first time when he was having sex with him because he fucking loosened him and made him comfortable like a normal intercourse should have. Second is that he's reassuring the mc that he'll always be there (idc if it's been of the wish), plus he's not hiding that he's a supernatural being, he's actually being honest about it and pleaded to mc that he should not run away when he sees with true form or whatever.
Overall,
Weird nice guy >>>>> bastard who don't know how to fuck
Spoiler if you haven't read it btw
Low-key hope they both die, like I feel like that's the most ideal ending of this story