
The suicide baiting part was out of nowhere and is such a toxic thing to say. Even as a throw away line or out of anger it just damages the relationship soooo much also it felt out of character for him to say so idk why that was added. What made it even worse was the „let’s have angry sex instead of communication“ right afterwards. Idk about anyone else but if my partner told me they might kill themselves if I ever leave then the follow up to that is certainly not sex.

Why do the characters in these stories always have four pairs of ears. It is so distracting once you realize how little sense it makes. I’m all for cute bunny and cat ears but then why keep the human ears…
Anyways otherwise cute story so far

It’s very likely cause the artist feels like it looks off without the human ears. I’ve tried drawing like that and took off the human ears, only for the head to look extremely off and empty in that area. It’s rare for artists to be able to draw it well without the human ears. The only way is to either cover it up with long hair or be good at drawing it with the animal ears only. Many artists struggle with it.

I really liked their Beta x alpha dynamic a lot in the flashbacks. And while we know how it turns out I think it would have been super intriguing to keep going with beta x alpha theme. It would have been so angsty and fun. But oh well

It’s always the kidney hahaha
„Hello beta that I used as cocksleeve. Even though I am the most fancy super dominant alpha I somehow require your kidney.“
„No mean alpha, even though I loved you I have long moved on (not)“
Then some back and forth, random forced sex and too short grovel arc and somehow they are in a living relationship lol

Love to see everyone hating the woman I stress of the husband who is the problem. Yeah the secretary is being mean but at least her feelings are somewhat valid though misguided. The “husband” is just awful and should be the receiving end of all the hatred, he keeps the woman he has a relationship with and marries another. Even if he was forced into it, he’s the problem.

I don’t see the chemistry between the omega and the recessive alpha at all, it seems so forced. The new dude appeared for two seconds and they had better chemistry than whatever they have been trying to sell to us so far. Not rooting for this or that to happen but recessive alpha should find self confidence and someone he happy and relaxed with.

Idk man. The new dude is a fucking weirdo. No chemistry there. It’s just because they have a history together where he was taken advantage of basically by the new dude. That’s toxicity, not positive chemistry. But still, I’d rather the MC find someone else, maybe an alpha. Alpha x alpha stories always hit the mark for me.
I was quite excited when they introduced the safe word, but of course these types of stories never miss a chance to step all over the wishes of the bottom.