
Rosetale was S++ in 136, but wasn't money king only s+? So did rosetale end up getting stronger than money king, or is money king's rank s++ and I didn't remember right. Or is it a driver situation, and money king is stronger than the rank they showed us. I'm mainly asking this because I don't think we've seen an s++ before

I feel like there's some stuff that's nice, but it feels like the writer is kinda holding themselves back by playing into troupes too hard. I like the main character, she's silly and has a lot of charisma. But at times, the reactions had are a bit too forced, especially considering that we're kinda just thrown into the world without much time to get to know the characters. Additionally, I think the romance is kinda super forced. ML complementing her hands kinda out of nowhere despite at that point not even that crazy amount of screen time yet, seemed like romance just to have romance in the story, rather than a relationship that they had built. There's also not really many named side characters as well, and what I mean by this is. There's small frames of side characters that show potential to be interesting, but just don't get any names or any time in the light. The only real character that aren't plot points is basically just the main character, which kinda makes you care a lot less about things. I think there's potential, just I feel that if the author tried a bit less to pander, I think it would feel a lot more natural since I think there's something here for sure. Sorry for the ramble, LOL

Is there a better translation of chapter 11 somewhere?

I honestly HATE april fools translations (most the times), but there's so many times that a real translation never comes out and it honestly ruins it a bit. I remember this one series where it took 2 years for me to find a real translation for this chapter that was super important for the series. but it was unreadable due to the april fools

Anyone else always forget that tia is also a reincarnator? It feels like something they've literally never touched except at the beginning because of the time travel stuff taking precedent. It makes me wonder why it's a detail to begin with since the story didn't need it. Not that it bothers me that much, just that it's funny to have something that's normally a huge plot point literally not matter at all here

I don't get why everyone is so shocked about cassian using fire in the 5v5 scrims??? Cassian literally used them vs rosetale when they first met did they not?? But literally everyone is like "So the rumors are true..." and other stuff. It's not THAT big an issue, it's just a lil bit confusing to me lol
So I've read the original twitter version, as well as the serialized version and I just gotta say. (although it could still enter a similar route as the og version was much further along) The writing and story is a loooooot different than the og version. There's still a lot fundementally the same, but the plot seems drastically changed, and the writing flow seems a lot more.... Natural? The og had a lot of stuff going for it, but it all felt a little too on the nose with some stuff. Even if it's a slow burn, I feel like this version has a better flow of the story
I totally agree! I think the translator mentioned the author changed the story progression because she was afraid the yuri fantasy niche would be too overwhelming for newcomers to either genre, but the limitations set allowed her to explore her world in a more concise manner.