
So what is this a over the top bdsm complex? Can they not do it like a normal couple? Instead of you know making the seme actually hate you so the domination feels realer to you. Are you really going to make his life miserable just so you can get off. And as for the seme at the end was it like he only gets over his torture by sleeping with the person that will still torture him even now. I mean they do say he may find somebody else but is that their plan right now a perpetual hell? Like what? Tbh tI know this is unrealistic in so many aspects but it has just enough sense throughout that now the end felt a bit too tragic.
How can people not like comedic breaks. They make sense after all they are children it's much better when children are having fun and happy.
I don't like the comedic breaks because they contradict the main theme of the story. Ktx.
Than your palette is dry for there can be many themes in stories as there are in life. Even the saddest tale can have sweet moments and that is what I appreciate about stories like these.