We winning with this one, W
Anyway, so far, it’s giving green flag and while awkward in moving forward (I lowkey thought it was gonna be the cute cat avoiding him for about 2 or so chapters but it’s straight down to business lmao) and it’s cute af
100/1 because there’s always one bitch who dislikes it out of a hundred people and lowkey, just don’t read if y’all ready to throw hands and beefing with the plot
Lowkey.. can this man stop being touchy touchy like that.. also, why was a younger picture of her shown and it’s just glossed over like it’s not a total red flag that not only is he a stalker, he’s just obsessed with her no matter old and so on she was ☠☠ title got me fucked up when mc wasn’t a queen but somewhat of a pushover too kick this man’s nuts so he can stop groping you w/o your permission
Bro, I was hoping it wouldn’t turn out basically nephew > love interest because bsffr, what the fuck does it do aside from giving an ick to readers (and no, I don’t appreciate you fucks who defend it), the plot and story was good up until shirtless scene. WHAT did it do to the plot?? Did we have something happen that doesn’t involve pseudo incest + age gap??? Learn how to cook a plot where it doesn’t involve romantic tension between characters that shouldn’t be having any instead of pulling the pseudo incest card
The plot is nothing special anyway, there's nothing to learn when the the author basically just copy the ' recipes / formula '. I've seen a few rofan which has similar plot progression as this one before also I think the age gap thing doesn't concern me but the fact that she thinks of him as her nephew and later turns into love interest is what makes me ill











Not only is this well made and has good plot, it represented issues so good that I cried multiple times reading. FL coping mechanism is so real though