the storytelling is so bad lmao the mafia boss character is so confusing its like theyre trying to make him seem like a good person even when hes raping the mc ?? gross
although it is a cute story i tjink in some aspects its overly convoluted and unnecessarily full of weird age gaps? i also dont love the ending where they are fated to live together eternally because well,, who would actually want that??? the story makes it seem like an happy ending but realistically even if they love each other having to infinitely meet and explain everything and then die and do that shit again would definitely get exhausting both mentally and emotionally for both of them
They don’t live forever with each other at the end! Or they do in the sense in which forever means happily ever after I think. They don’t eat the peach, so that last life is their very last—they mention that in the first side story and talk abt how they’re going to get old
man the son and her husband piss me off so much, theyre so realistic (╬￣皿￣) mc deserved better!!
girl its just an office job calm your ass downΣ( ￣□￣||)
im so glad i finally found an original story with a cool concept (￣∇￣) plus the fl is hot as hell oh my god she can slice my neck and ill thank her.
i cant wait to see her abandon the cursed sword and live happily (▰˘◡˘▰)
why does the translation keeps using female pronouns for yurien? its confusing me so much
Likely just machine translations and not proofread properly. It was irritating me a bit too.
yeah its really confusing lmao i started to doubt myself and wondered if this was yuri (￣∇￣")
SOL WAKE TF UP AND TELL IAN ABOUT BRIANS STORYY PLEASE I BEG （/TДT)/ OR IAN PICK UP A DAMN HISTORY BOOK (╬￣皿￣)
dropped at 23, interesting premise but bad execution, the fl comes across as just dumb and bland, the story drags the mystery out too much, at chapter 20 we still have no clue whats going on and the fl is in no way suspicious of anything. The characters dont really have anything interesting or unique about them honestly. Its a shame because i was expecting something new but to me the pacing is so bad it bored me to read