Let me get this straight. So in this chapter, the following happened:
- Lucas indirectly challenged Ijekiel.
- Ijekiel indirectly fought back.
- Original novel Izekiel was attracted to athy at first sight despite being engaged to Jenette.
- Jealous Lucas.
- Lucas kissing Athy's hand
- Claude awakening his protective senses towards Athy despite the distance
Hmmm, okay I like where this is going. Please proceed (≧∀≦)
Roy was already perfect and cute as he was.
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Why did they make him a prince? I'm sure it was to end it a way so MC could put her abilities and talent to build a nation's economy...
STILL
I wonder why wouldn't they just let MCs end with someone with normal - and by this I mean no princes or billionaires or millonaires backgrounds.
Oh yeah, it's Harlequin.
Honestly, it wasn't bad. I actually found it refreshing compared to the typical harlequins whose women get pregnant and then reunite with the father of the baby or MCs that break up due to miscommunication and misunderstandings.
This was about a couple who went separate ways due to differences on opinion. They talked about it, but the FL choose to leave. At least the motives were reasonable.
There are still questionable things in this oneshot, but overall, better than you average harlequin.
Sorry, but I'm not satisfied with this ending. The story started pretty interesting and it had potential, but it disappointed me towards the end. The end was too rushed and I still feel like there was still some unfinished business between Summer and Loshi.
Honestly, I don't blame her for her choice. Had I been in her choose, I would have done the same. But I wouldn't be able to accept that person easily and I would still have some lingering feelings for Loshi. The guy went through a lot to be thrown out and abandoned again. Until the very last page, I had hoped for something different for him, a happy ending. This guy stuck with them and did nothing wrong but what did Ouchen do this whole time? Nothing.









Okay, but I've reached a point where I did not even feel pity or feel that I disliked less Heronia in the original story.
And usually, I would even feel bad for the most evil villain/villainess.