Haha new dude really has no chance coming in between them lmao they’re just too horny for each other (▰˘◡˘▰)
Ah I see, another brand of d!ck: may I present the invisible pp
YFRSDYTSSREA PLS
Oh man toom!cs chapters feel sooo incredibly short ┗( T﹏T )┛
Sometimes I forget they’re hs kids, but then I see dumpling mush and wholeass lemons thrown into a wine cup and I remember lmao
You can even see his attempt to slice it lmao
Please I'm 21 and that's better than anything I could ever attempt to make
they're here still in middle school though
even worse lmaooo
Ok, so turns out uke is a bit of a masochist.
Ngl, it would’ve been nice to know it beforehand, or at least make it a little more obvious somewhere? I feel like that’s not how his character was portrayed from the beginning, so of course a lot of us were taken aback by seme’s actions... when in reality, it seems like uke was into it from the beginning?
Messy development. I think it would’ve been more enjoyable if we all knew those simple details about their dynamic. (Bc friends with benefits does not automatically entail this S/M dynamic. We could’ve guessed seme, apart from being an asshole, was a bit of a sadist, but it was not that obvious that uke seems to be a masochist, and that’s really important with power dynamics and consent and how you want the reader to react and engage with the story :/ )
I get how you feel lol. But to be honest, the MC did give hints about liking being forced. Yes, he's terrified of being caught by others, but he got excited when Dojin forced it a little more. He did want to give that blowjob, but he was shy. I do not think that Dojin didn't know that MC wanted It, i Just think he was waiting for a "clue" so he could Go for It. The clue came when MC made the bet/proposal.
Yes, it's a messy development, like most relationships are, but Dojin wasn't holding his hands, so It was fairly easy for the MC to make him stop.
Btw, If you ever had a d*** shoved down your throat, when you hit their legs doesn't necessarily mean you want them to stop, kekw
Sure! That’s a totally valid point. What i meant was that the way the uke was portrayed at the beginning is somewhat not consistent/ congruent with what was CLEARLY perceived in this last scene. Idk, i might not be explaining myself the right way.
And getting turned on / having a physical reaction by some actions doesn’t necessarily mean that you’re into it? It’s all about context. For example if you’re drunk, like that one time with the uke, it’s definitely not a “YES I LIKE THIS” sign that he got it up just bc he was being touched. The seme was definitely being pushy, and over the top.
However!! I know this is fiction, I don’t want to overanalyze or anything, I just felt that the development could’ve gone better. I think I could’ve enjoyed it more perhaps :) but I will continue reading and see where it goes ♡
(And yes, I know that patting your partner’s leg during a bj doesn’t necessarily mean that you want them to stop lmaoo. Actually it was very clear in that scene that he was into it hehe. Like I really have no problem with that, the uke did want to give him a bj after all, but probably not while being half asleep and suddenly having a dick shoved forcefully down his throat, but that’s okay, some people are into that, including the uke apparently haha)
I’m actually glad he found out. For a second I thought the side story was going to end with them getting together and that’s it lol
Bro kinda hot tho ( ° ʖ °)