
I thought this story was sweet but I would have loved to read more of the first story!! I mean the first story was cut off by the brothers story. I wanted to go further into the younger brothers story since it started with it!! As for the older brothers story I didn't expect the older brother to be the uke, I thought he was going to be the same!!! I just think both stories could be longer!! Still it was cute!! thx D

At least I thought it was a threesome when you look at the cover of the book but it is the third person helping the other two having sex!!! I wanted to see them all having a sex all together, then you can call it a threesome ha ha ha!!! This was sexy but I wouldn't call it a story!! I think this could have been longer made into a story it was good concept and drawing real sexy but I want to know how far this relationship was gong to go!! I did like the art work it was well done!!! thx D

You know this is a story that says to you What happens after this? Where does this relationship go? Will the brother Natsukawa stay out of it or will he keep on torturing Obisev(I think this is his name)? I would like to see more on these three!!! Even so I think this is such a cute almost yaoi story!!! thx D

This is a cute story and I enjoyed reading it!! There is one thing I was wondering about on page 34 there was a quote by Yuuma that says "Who was the one who took the other's virginity not to long ago", Is he talking about him or other peoples virginity he took? If it is the other people it shows Yuuma isn't a virgin ha ha ha!!! I would love to see more of these two!!! thx D

Yuuma is referring to the fact that he just took Hinata's virginity because of the fact that Hinata was commenting that now that he (Hinata) has experience, Yuuma could "finally ask [him] for help" - in other words, what good would it do for Yuuma to ask Hinata for help with relationships when it was Yuuma who took Hinata's virginity. (I have no idea if Yuuma was also a virgin before that point as well - I think I kind of imagine him not to be; just that he wasn't serious about any of the girls he had gone out with before…)
BTW, did anyone else think it was incredibly stupid that Hinata wanted a girlfriend so he could help Yuuma out, and then he went straight to him for advice?!? ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

I am happy that this was updated but why stop? I can understand that there is other projects and I am happy there is but don't forget this one for another five years!!! I just want to know what happened to Maki did he run away after hearing Yoshi's father talking to his wifes picture? I hope Yoshi finds him and change his mind about leaving so PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!! thx D
I like these two stories and how they started but I was less impressed by their boring love scenes!! I would have loved to see the first couple's uke finally get used to doing it with his partner without the pain!!! Make the love scenes longer and more explicit being the perv I am ha ha ha!!! I am glad that Yone is starting to have a love interest but I hope they end up together without this sex friend thing cause I think Yone deserves a real love life with a partner who loves him!!! I would love to see more of the first couple too if they are still together and happy maybe a long sexual explicit love scene for all would be great so PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ASAP!!! thx D