
it is starting to get confusing at this point I'm rooting for both stories but running them at the same time and not coordinatedly, my mind tells me to marinate this for a while

I'm just starting facts here, the translations were never the issue here, it was the transitions of story is way out off radar sometimes between mc's story and 704's story. They are gonna tackle for couple of chapters then going back to the mc, it's a never ending cycle and a shift to the plot as well. Also, about Harry Potter is completely irrelevant, considering it was having plenty of books already and it was really confusing if you just skimmed through the pages and read it chapter by chapter. There's a lot to settle first rather than a sudden shift again jusy for the sake of story going long

hmm as a plot enjoyer sorry it's quite lacking in context in terms of the separation and the chasing. I felt it didn't give much of a justice in terms of the reconnection, like it was just a slip in the story but the start and the ending left a good impression though, I love it. It was just a bit rushed the reconciliation which took years sorry?! and they just get back just like that

I actually find it so human to felt insecure about your relationship gap age especially when it's 16 yrs, you have to think what really will happen and also what other people would think. I don't think it's a bad writing like I'm seeing a comments here. Age gap that high is always overlooked in reality and we had the grasp that Mr. Lim will end it based on what he heard from the aunt. he felt more insecure because of that
damn, it's been year since I read this story, expected a lot and fight with many and met with disappointment and based on what I've been seeing, it's chasing arc and it didn't feel like it yet. I refused to read it still because it doesn't feel like worth it I mean going side by side perspective fictional and reality, how can you love someone who r@ped you and emotionally abused you. I don't get it, how can you repent those especially when Dan had been through worse with his life already. I still used to think that all of the readers are here because of just the chasing arc and they lead to justifying all of Jaekyung abusing just because there would be a "chasing arc" eventually and as a reader of 5 yrs and more, I don't get it still. BJ Alex was not like this despite having chasing arcs and met a good reviews.
and just because an author made a one good story from the past doesn't mean that all of their work would be good too. are we being blind here? A lot of people will say again that "it's just story and fictional" like how long are you gonna use that argument in supporting this kind of stories. I've been fighting a lot of readers here, I don't care what y'all what will say
lastly, there's no point arguing with reader whose values doesn't reflect on what they are reading and in real life. You can read this but you wouldn't go all out of your way to argue with someone just because someone is being logical by saying that this story is REALLY bad. who justifies r@pe? seek help
and going to the point of defending the whole story is INSANE we get it, you like your chasing arcs but, chasing arcs is there for the thrill of story. of course, no one's gonna like a boring usual love story
I wholeheartedly agree with this, idk how the author is gonna pull this shit together, but I highly doubt it's gonna satisfy any of us as readers. She made us go THROUGH it with this bitchass jk
at some point fictional or not, the message and images she’s sending to readers is disgusting. this entire series is just r—p porn with the excuse of a very poorly written story, the only reason people are defending it is because they enjoy the art.