
The last few chapters were pretty rushed and fast paced, i think it wouldve been better if it were +10 chapters longer also if showed extras of them in the above ground. Maybe explore a bit more on the side characters and the world setting. I was rlly interested in the setting and its lore but ig its not the number 1 focus. But its ok i still loved it
i was suprised the story wasnt dragged out and got to the point (unlike some chinese bls...). Good short read.
i would be excited if the plot twist makes ml a red flag ml acts so innocent like a toddler im not into it ykwim
I find it refreshing after all the manipulative tops in stories ;-;