that was so motherfucking hot?!! the demon king is so goddamn gorgeous as well (I'd fuck him too tbh) I wish this has more chaps but :(( it's a good read btw, one of the spicy short stories out there lmaooo xD
just finished binge reading this.
I feel like I just wasted my time lmaooo I just keep on reading every next chap because I was waiting for the love potion to wear off. I was also expecting that he'll be able to make the potion that he wants to make since like chapter 3, but he still haven't make it.
mc's also kinda annoying, he's literally crying over some small things. this is so tiresome, the plot is good but there's a lot of unnecessary sexual intercourse. I'm also annoyed by the fact that alec might be not affected by the potion now and is just taking advantage of the situation.
I also feel quite sad for lily if mc might really have her supposedly magic. it's funny that he loves the novel but purposely changing its plot, saying that he loves alec so much and can't resist him because he is his favorite character, when he can literally push him away if he wants to save the og novel's plot. mc is so dumb and naive.
overall, I feel like dropping this because this is going nowhere, I'm also sick of the sexual stuff almost every chapter.
I read this for the two babies, gala and garan because I love them so much!! cutiess!!
binge reading is actually fun not until you don't even have a single idea about what's happening. the plot is messed up, even in chap 100+ they still don't have a relationship development, the wedding is rushed, and so are their feelings. it almost feels like it's forced lmaooo
I can say that trolese have changed for the past few years while yunshen had just gotten worse. his character is nowhere understable, he's only an op mc with no character development. (he has the worst attitude and personality in this story tbh) I was like “okay, his actions and decisions are understable” on the first chapters, but he never really trusted trolese until the very end. if I must say, he's like a manipulative puppeteer and the puppet is trolese.
it's not that I hate him though, it's just that the characterizations are so fucked up. there's a lot of LOOPHOLES, the kidnap scene is also not included, and it's just missing a lot.
overall, I had fun reading this because of the cute babies. they're like my serotonin booster :3
they're both so silly!! i love them hehehe cuties <33 I wish there was more though :((
DISGUSTING OLD GEEZER, GET AWAY FROM MY BBG EW EW EW DON'T TOUCH HIM
bud, I must assure you that dojin's way too obsessed w/ you to even snap a single finger of yours now. he won't be able to cause you any harm, and that desire of him to win is just his way to show off because he wants to impress you ╮(￣▽￣)╭
this is so fucked up xD and I just realized that it's the same author as pfeos so... I'm not gonna expect anything. I just love the art style
where is our obsessed blondie when his damsel in distress needs him ?? /hi
I'm positive that aryka is NOT yoen. anw, I fucking hate Vince's mom
dojin seems to be enjoying teasing yoosung, stop toying with your hubby bro
re-reading this for the nth time because I love crying myself to sleep TT ang sakit² pa din puta, sana cnaksak niyo na lang ako
who tf brings a gun to a battlefield bruh, that's foul
everyone of us needs a family like Keane have, don't we? especially onyx ofc
everyone needs a friend like Xan!! best boii I'm rooting for u