If he falls apart that easily, won't his Dick come off while thrusting, tho? Serious question.
Still love it. I, myself, planned a similar Shortstory for an Anthology. So I totally ship this topic anyway.
LOVED IT.
Duct Tape, fixed lots of things
Boyfriend: the new dildo version. A feeling you will never forget.
Σ( ￣□￣||) OMG! You're rotten! (Get it?) I guess that why the call us 'fujoshis'
The Characters' behavior makes no sense to me at all.
I thought there would be some really dark, psychological plot development, in which the older brother maybe tries to kill himself, or gets raped by the younger one. All of that in addition to a plot that leads there and from there onwards, would have been a lot more reasonable.
At least, that's what I think. And no, this isn't about me preferring darker plots. And yes, this seemed to be a plotline that I particularly love, but it's also not about that not happening.
This is solely based in the fact that the first two chapters indicate a story that just isn't meant for an outcome like that. It's illogical, though it starts pretty good.
Would rape really make more sense tho? Or could it be ppl are so used to it happening in manga they feel that's the logical outcome even tho it might not be? A question to ask ourselves.
Of course it would make sense. Because the younger brother dies want bis brother in thst way and seems crazy. And I only gave examples of what would make more sense. A lot of things could have happened, but what happened makes no sense at all.
It's got nothing to do with "getting used to it", it's about the facto that thise two aren't in good terms. Both are mentally out of it, so there's no way you could fix this by just talking a little.
It's not exactly the worst, but ... it's cringy, stupid, overly exaggerated, seems to rushed and the protagonists are annoying as fuck, especially the so-called »werewolf« (no, really, what kind of disgrace is that for a werewolf?!)
Example for the adjectives I have used above:
- The Girls from the class react to some weird double-confession, with completely overexaggerated anger, since they just decided for themselves that those idiotic brothers were just making a joke. It was going far enough, that she was willing to CUT HIM UP with a readily drawn cutter knife. I repeat: she was about to CUT HIM UP. To commit a SERIOUS CRIME. Over NOTHING in particular. A JOKE as she called it herself.
The reaction to an act like this was like nothing. Like she just made him drop his books, called him names or tripped him. But even for that, the shown reaction would have been somewhat insufficiant.
- On a fucking fullmoon, while knowing he would turn by just looking at the moon ONCE, he left the house and rand through the streets on some stupid whim. If it's that serious, when someone finds out about him, then MAYBE he should pay some mind to where he goes at times like these. Like ... he should MAYBE stay at home and close the curtains. But that's just me, making unreasonable demands, right? -.-
- WTF?! How can he be such a weak wuss?! That's not a werewolf. And it isn't proud either. It's nothing more than a cosplayer for a bad porno.
Also, what's with the drawing style? It's something I rarely comment on, but here it's a style that not only doesn't appeal to me, but it doesn't even fit the genre. Since when are chibis sexy? And those guys ... c'mon, I don't even know where to start anymore.