-first chapters are lowkey super rushed. we didn't spend enough time with the zombie/world ending part at the start (to me ir felt like when you're writing a fic in your head before bed and you keep jumping ahead to the good bits because you want both characters together.) he just found him, saved him bc he's a teacher and now they're suddenly in a small utopia ? we could have spent more time with them in the journey, see how they get to know each other maybe? -there's no reason for guwon to be attracted to the mc yet, i don't understand where this infatuation is coming from. he has no personality so far. -the body proportions are ludicrous, the scene (cap5) of them standing in front of each other made roll my eyes so far i think i saw my brain. -i love a good himbo but there's a disconnect between his sleazy underworld looks and his role as a leader, it's giving me the ick
the mc is so uninquisitive it lowkey pmo. wdym a hulking beast of a man with coal black arms and a frankenstein neck is touching all over you and you ain't got no queries about none of that ??
rn the one with the highest chaps is the scalanlation version, the one up to chap 30 labelled official is the official translator;;; there’s diff ppl who uploaded the scanlation overtime cuz some uploaders dropped it and/or wanted to settle for a nicer translation
rn the one with the highest chaps is the scalanlation version, the one up to chap 30 labelled official is the official translator;;; there’s diff ppl who uploaded the scanlation overtime cuz some uploaders dr... namachi
-first chapters are lowkey super rushed. we didn't spend enough time with the zombie/world ending part at the start (to me ir felt like when you're writing a fic in your head before bed and you keep jumping ahead to the good bits because you want both characters together.) he just found him, saved him bc he's a teacher and now they're suddenly in a small utopia ? we could have spent more time with them in the journey, see how they get to know each other maybe?
-there's no reason for guwon to be attracted to the mc yet, i don't understand where this infatuation is coming from. he has no personality so far.
-the body proportions are ludicrous, the scene (cap5) of them standing in front of each other made roll my eyes so far i think i saw my brain.
-i love a good himbo but there's a disconnect between his sleazy underworld looks and his role as a leader, it's giving me the ick