I hated this back then bc MC never had any real emotional connection with any of them, still hate this now bc what was the point of writing a 'BL' where MC has slight homophobic tendencies, naively plays around, hurts ppl around him , and also never ends up with anyone because he's straight as fuck??? It just makes you think "Ok so what even was the point??? "
I followed this year's ago and now that I'm rereading it I actually found myself liking the extra a lot.. For me, a good 3P is when all of them love each other to bits, not just 2 guys who like one person. When the stories are like that they give off "I just want a harem but don't want to admit it" vibes. So yeah, I don't see them loving each other and having their own thing a problem when each have their own thing with Yuuzen too from what I remember from the other works.
Hot take but I really don't like it when people say "Idgaf about your backstory what a waste of chapters". Thats literally the point of telling a story??? You explain the reasons why characters act the way they do, you show what they experienced, how they felt, but that doesn't mean you're trying to make them 'good' by showing why they became 'bad'. Honestly ppl nowadays have such low patience and reading comprehension they're better off reading those TikTok ad stories









I want to sink to my bed holy fuckkkkk... He's cute but the second hand embarrassment omg
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