i was okay but then i actually saw him pregnant and realized i want to die
I bailed the moment I saw him pregnant, even though I tried so hard to thug through everything else
i almost left when the younger brother got in on it (ch.3)
I have no one to blame but myself, this literally created a new method of self harm. The things I try in the name of yaoi, ~sigh
（￣へ￣）ikr
who tf made this shit. like, tf. sometimes the drawings are good, sometimes they're actual fucking trash. sometimes the story is nice, sometimes it goes all over the place. i fucking hate this. va va voom. bye henny
Wow. Never ONCE thought that the art style was deliberately drawn this way? One to showcase the time they were children, others to showcase the mood? So why is it you can judge the story but I can't judge your review as the literal trash it is? Also the story did not take a sudden turn, since we were kinda given HINTS about this in previous issues? Reading INcomprehension much, sweetcheeks?
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/gloomy_night/uu/gloomy_night-chapter-1 (a traumatizing flashback, seems pretty serious)
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/gloomy_night/uu/gloomy_night-chapter-1/2/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/gloomy_night/uu/gloomy_night-chapter-1/3/ http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/gloomy_night/uu/gloomy_night-chapter-4.1/2/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/gloomy_night/uu/gloomy_night-chapter-5.1/3/
these are just a few examples
1. why would an author make their first few drawings bad at the start? they should try their best to attract people to their manga/manwha.
2. even in the "serious" setting, the art is fairly bad in a few panels
3. just because the story part has a silly mood, it doesn't mean it should be drawn poorly? that makes no sense. making the characters look bouncier, lighting, shading, and dialogue is what should make a "fun" mood.
4. even the "good" panels have bad proportioning, little to no detail, shit line-art, awkward positioning, strange expressions, poor anatomy, etc.
5. the story I've read so far seems pretty boring and I could care less about the characters. they both seem like cardboard cutouts of "sad tragic boy" personalities.
THE MOOD OF A STORY OR THE AGE OF THE CHARACTERS DOES NOT EXCUSE SHIT DRAWING??? LIKE ARE YOU OK??
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/petit_mignon/ - for example
this is a very goofy and cute manga, but it's still amazingly drawn. that's because this person knows the mood shouldn't worsen the art's quality.
"So why is it you can judge the story but I can't judge your review as the literal trash it is?"
I can judge this story because it's a public work that this person posted. Same as my comment. Where tf did I say "oh, btw, don't judge this comment you're not allowed!1!!1"
you're arguing with an invisible comment henney.
This is my fisrt work :D that's why it's a mess sorry for that. Right now I'm in my second comic which is a little bit better than this one.
I like your critics, what do you think about the art style of my second comic?
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/rotten-roses/prologue-part-6/viewer?title_no=112576&episode_no=8
:3
(I'm sorry if at any points my words seemed too harsh, I was just trying to make a point with Anonymous.)
Yes! The art in that is beautiful! I wish you the most luck on your new project (:
If I may give you my opinion: Your 2nd project definitely has better art and more consistent in terms of character drawing. It’s beautiful, maybe the hands and legs proportion at some parts could be drawn better. However, your 2nd project has too much going on in the background. It’s too crowded so it lacks balance and make it difficult to focus on the main scene. If u want to emphasize the background you could do it in one panel and the scene on the next one. No need to cram everything at once. It’s like when you are wearing polkadot shirt and tiger print pants together, u dont know where to look at. On top of that, the panels flow and division could have a lot of improvement. I think you kinda inconsistent in deciding the format. Do u want to draw a comic, manga, or webtoon? As it is now, it makes the scenes to become too choppy imo.
Yeah, for my second project I discovered a lot of things. While I wanted to be like a manga I added some color and then I started thinking that probably it would be better if I change the format.
You don't have an idea how much your opinion helped me because I never thought in that way about the backgrounds. Now that you are telling me this everything makes sense.
In the way you are telling me I draw fewer backgrounds, looks better and I do fewer efforts. (づ￣ ³￣)づ ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Kyungsoo you dumb cunt just explain what happened. Snap snap. Get to it.
Petition for Tian to cut Meili's nails. Like damn, it's hot, but that shit hurt.
Right, meilis a fuckin hawk.
HAHHAHAHAHAHA WTF YOU JUST MADE MY DAY COMPLETE HAHAHAHAHA
Oh my god
TOWA RUNS AS FAST AS YOUR LEGS CAN 'CAUSE THIS SHIT IS FUCKED
x) I was like ok the threesomes were hot you had your fun you paid your debt now it's time to run xDD I feel you
Im actually more amazed someone could write shit like this. god bless harada, id 10/10 eat your ass.
this....this is my favorite review in all of history
Lol the likes in your comment is 69, i hope it stays like that foreverლ(´ڡ`ლ)
did a 12 year old help draw some of these panels
This comment makes me want to puke even more.
why tho